First, ditch the gun picture. Or since it looks like you can use more than one, move it to someplace less prominent. You're supposed to be putting your best foot forward, right? You say you can dress up, but this is you wearing an old t-shirt, making a face, on the range with a bunch of guys. Step it up. You don't need to wear a suit and a tie, but at least a shirt with a collar. Women like to know they can take you to their cousins wedding and you'll look presentable. There's nothing there that shows that side.
Also ditch the xrays. Old people talk about medical stuff. Unless you got that injury base jumping, save it for after bingo.
Picture with kids is ok.
Don't do the "if you want to know, ask." Its wishy washy. Just tell..lots of things in there you don't like. What do you like? What do you want to do? Certain kinds of food you like or want to try? Is there some activity you've been wanting to try? Hiking a trail, or putting together a car or winning a shooting competition? Try putting things in the positive, rather than negative.
Anwyay. just some quick thoughts.