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Posted: 2/16/2007 1:18:58 PM EDT
[Last Edit: --bullseye--]
[#1]
Not quite, I'm not nearly a good enough writer. My membership was donated for reasons unrelated to zombies  .Thanks for the replies guys, I already started chapter 4, and think you'll all like it.  ETA: I owns my own page 3!!!1!!!  !
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Posted: 2/20/2007 12:36:12 PM EDT
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Bump- new chapter added!
Hopefully the action in this chapter will satisfy the arfcom masses. There is more to come as well. I tried to knock this chapter out a little faster so as to keep everyone interested. Hopefully you guys are still liking the story. I'll do my best to keep the fixes coming! |
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Posted: 2/20/2007 1:16:43 PM EDT
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Good Stuff!! Keep it coming!!
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Posted: 2/20/2007 1:30:48 PM EDT
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Keep it comming please!
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GA, USA
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Posted: 2/20/2007 2:34:13 PM EDT
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Great new chapter.
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WA, USA
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Posted: 2/20/2007 2:39:47 PM EDT
[#6]
Nice! If you ever get stuck and stop updating, then we'll unleash some zombies on your house just to give you inspiration...
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TX, USA
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Posted: 2/20/2007 7:33:47 PM EDT
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tag
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Posted: 2/20/2007 8:18:52 PM EDT
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NICE!!!
keep it up |
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FL, USA
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Posted: 2/20/2007 9:06:22 PM EDT
[#9]
Great start
I LOVE zombie stories. 
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IA, USA
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Posted: 2/21/2007 9:21:37 PM EDT
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BURP
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MO, USA
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Posted: 2/22/2007 1:17:29 AM EDT
[#11]
great!! keep it coming please.
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Posted: 2/22/2007 12:49:22 PM EDT
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+1 |
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CA, USA
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Posted: 2/26/2007 3:36:54 PM EDT
[#13]
Bump and request for more...
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WA, USA
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Posted: 3/8/2007 12:40:03 AM EDT
[#14]
Dang, another dead zombie thread!
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Posted: 3/8/2007 12:43:28 AM EDT
[#15]
Yep..."return of the no ending zombie fiction" |
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Posted: 3/8/2007 2:46:47 AM EDT
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I haven't abandoned this. It's just been a busy past 16 days (It's only been 16 days guys, I just need a little more time ). Expect more next week hopefully.This will not go the way of Artyboy's story, I promise. 
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Posted: 3/20/2007 3:06:37 PM EDT
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Bump for the new chapter!
Sorry about the long wait on this one. I just never got a chance to sit down and write another chapter; I can't seem to write unless I have really thought out what I want to do with the story. Sorry again to keep you guys waiting so long. Hopefully you guys are liking the story so far. Keep this bumped if you like it so everyone gets a chance to read it! 
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Posted: 3/20/2007 3:52:10 PM EDT
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Not bad at all.
Although I must confess that I think the gun totin' population would fare better than most zombie books and movies would have us believe. I guess it makes for a better novel that way. John |
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WI, USA
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Posted: 3/20/2007 4:00:26 PM EDT
[#19]
Good stuff!
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Posted: 3/20/2007 4:42:16 PM EDT
[Last Edit: --bullseye--]
[#20]
Yeah, we probably would be alright, but like you said, it wouldn't make a good story. But you will notice that all the people in my story that are surviving are "totin' guns". Little tid-bit to keep you guys interested(not really a spoiler, but it's previously unreleased info). My new character "Rob" has an AR-15.  ETA: in regards to Rob having an AR= I haven't decided what kind. Bushmaster, RRA, Armalite, DPMS? carbine, mid length, dissipator, 20"? I'm open to input- you guys get to decide.
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MO, USA
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Posted: 3/20/2007 4:47:33 PM EDT
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w00t!! great chapter! Keep up the good work.
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FL, USA
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Posted: 3/20/2007 5:41:32 PM EDT
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Its Good keep it a coming.
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TX, USA
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Posted: 3/21/2007 10:33:15 AM EDT
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My vote is that Rob has a kit gun with chrome-lined A1 barrel that he assembled himself.
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MN, USA
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Posted: 3/22/2007 12:11:53 PM EDT
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I vote for a 18” precision rig with a 1-4 scope. Close and mid range covered. And since zombies are attracted to sound you HAVE to have a silencer.
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Posted: 3/22/2007 1:10:54 PM EDT
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I like it, keep it coming.
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MN, USA
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Posted: 4/9/2007 3:51:45 PM EDT
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Lets go here. I'm waiting
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Posted: 4/10/2007 1:10:06 PM EDT
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I need a fix!!
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IL, USA
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Posted: 4/11/2007 12:48:03 AM EDT
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Posted: 4/11/2007 6:39:22 PM EDT
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Great work.
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Posted: 7/16/2007 2:07:48 AM EDT
[Last Edit: --bullseye--]
[#30]
Sorry about the extremely long wait on this chapter, it's short length, lack of action, and lackluster quality. I just need to move the story along. I tend to dwell too much on detail, and in the process type out some jumbled, confusing crap.
The next chapters should hopefully be a bit better. I am planning more action, don't worry. I'm reading some other internet zombie fiction and some of the stories are 100% action and that tends to just get unbelievable after a while I think, so I still want to have a little down time in my story. Anyway, sorry again for the wait, I haven't abandoned this story. I just went on a hiatus . I have tomorrow off after working 6 days in a row, so I should get a good start on the next chapter.
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Posted: 7/16/2007 6:29:15 AM EDT
[#31]
Thanks for the new chapter. Keep up the good work.
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MO, USA
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Posted: 7/16/2007 9:04:47 AM EDT
[#32]
Thanks for the update. Down time is necessary to maintain believability. Great chapter.
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Posted: 7/16/2007 6:03:55 PM EDT
[Last Edit: --bullseye--]
[#33]
I'll give this one bump for the evening crew.
Thanks mustangracer and KOW for the support, I know you guys have been readers since the beginning! |
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Posted: 7/25/2007 5:54:37 PM EDT
[Last Edit: BlueNoteExpress]
[#34]
I just found this story, and I like what you've got so far.
I do have a couple of questions about names though. Is it Robert/Rob or Ronald/Ron? Is Rob/Ron's friend's name Mike or Mark? I'm a little confused. |
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Posted: 7/25/2007 9:47:55 PM EDT
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It is Rob and Mike. The one Ron in there was a typo (the "N" key is right next to the "B" key )I don't know what happened with the Mike and Mark thing. I wrote this last chapter on and off over the course of a few months (for almost 4 weeks I couldn't find the flash drive I had the partial chapter stored on  ). I guess the names got changed in my head sometime in there.Sorry for the confusion  . I probably wrecked the story for you now. Some search and replace in Micro Word has ironed out the problems now though.(I'm working on the next chapter as I type this and now I can't keep the names straight! Ron and Mark sounds better.....but it is supposed to be Rob and Mike. I've got to stick with the original names. I might just kill them off now, I'm so confused! . Maybe not, but now I won't feel so bad if I do...)ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE ROB MIKE (maybe that little exercise will help) |
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Posted: 7/25/2007 11:32:52 PM EDT
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Good job so far. It looks like it has potential.
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Posted: 7/26/2007 12:09:47 AM EDT
[#37]
waiting for more
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TN, USA
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Posted: 7/26/2007 12:11:14 AM EDT
[#38]
Great work keep it up.
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Posted: 7/26/2007 4:12:05 AM EDT
[#39]
Nah, you didn't wreck the story for me. Please keep going.
I just saw a couple of places where it looked like characters changed names, and I thought I'd bring it to your attention. |
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USA
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Posted: 7/28/2007 5:12:31 PM EDT
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looking forward to more!
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Posted: 7/28/2007 7:09:05 PM EDT
[#41]
Good stuff so far!
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Posted: 7/28/2007 8:16:15 PM EDT
[#42]
i like zombie storys keep up the good work
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Posted: 7/28/2007 8:46:45 PM EDT
[Last Edit: KOW]
[#43]
You keep writing and I'll keep reading. |
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Posted: 7/28/2007 8:49:50 PM EDT
[#44]
and into active topics this goes
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MO, USA
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Posted: 7/28/2007 10:17:47 PM EDT
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+1 NP, I agree, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. |
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Posted: 7/29/2007 2:51:49 AM EDT
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What he said..
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Posted: 7/31/2007 1:36:23 PM EDT
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bullseye, Thanks for updating your story. I really like it and can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 8/1/2007 12:26:18 AM EDT
[Last Edit: --bullseye--]
[#48]
OK, I know I said more action, but this is what I came up with for this chapter. Sorry!
I absolutely, positively, 100% promise that zombie's heads will be perforrated in the next chapter though. I know the gun stuff in this chapter is a bit over the top, but oh well, I like that stuff. This story is written mainly for an audience of arfcommers , so it shouldn't go over to many peoples heads. Sorry if you think it is bad. I wasn't 100% satisfied with this chapter, but I just wanted to post it and move on to writing the next chapter. I seem to have gotten into a routine this past week of writing a little bit each night after work. It probably makes for lesser quality writing, but I just don't have it in me to type 3 pages in one sitting. So I should have a new chapter out in a reasonable time frame with my new system. Hoping you guys aren't getting bored with the story. I am going to try and dream up some good stuff for the coming chapters! |
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Posted: 8/1/2007 1:06:11 AM EDT
[#49]
KEEP IT UP
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MO, USA
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Posted: 8/1/2007 7:10:47 AM EDT
[#50]
WooHoo! My dream, a suppressed 10/22! keep it up man!
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