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If you don't mind a bit of critique here....
They are exposed and processed nicely.
Two things that just kill it for me are the horizons.
Top photo should be straightened up and centered. You're using the bridge as a frame. No one likes a crooked frame.
Bottom photo should have the horizon line below the head or above it, not going through it. the big black...thing... coming out of the back of her head is distracting.
Overall, thanks for not doing what everyone else does. I hate the idea of senior photos mainly because of all the crap thats out there. I've doen a few, but usually just refer out.
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I appreciate the notes greatly.
In the first photo are you talking about rotating the photo so everything is level? I haven't done much work to that one (or any of them for that matter). I totally agree with what you're saying if what I got out of your comment was what you were trying to convey. In regard to the horison in that photo, where would you have put it? I took that shot from a few angles, but liked the "out of the camera" look of that one the best.
In the second photo I see exactly what you're saying. I did a pretty poor job there, but I assure you it's better than when she was a few feet to the right of the frame and a fallen tree in the water made it look like she had quite the appendage coming off of her pelvis. Yikes.
Thanks again for the feedback.