Posted: 1/20/2009 2:31:32 PM EDT
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I just finished posting my first story at another web site and have been granted permission to link to it. It's called "Normal"
Normal - Grand58742 For those that don't have a Frugal Squirrels account, it's a free registration. I'd appreciate it if you could take the time to read over it and give me some feedback on here. Grand |
Chances are, I am who pissed in their cheerios...
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not a member there since 2000 when i lost enternet connection for a while, can't remember password. so i can't read it either...
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My conservative commonwealth's 232 year old state flag is a direct COC violation. Our founding fathers approved of images of bared breasts...
| GREAT BOOK!!! It was long took me a week to finish But i loved it! I cant help but think this is right around the corner minus the attacks. It just donst seem like it would take much for a financial meltdown and then I would wish i was at the "Dayfield Ranch" Hell i wish i had i place like that anyway. How incredible that would be to wake up everyday in such beauty! |
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Originally Posted By ilbob:
what a pain in the neck registration process. why not put your story where people can read it without having to go through so many hoops? One huge reason is for all the formatting. It took me close to 12 hours just to get it right over there when it was transfered from one forum to the next. It wsn't a process I was too eager to start new over here. Gary_P Please don't throw it around on the net in Word just yet. I've got a PDF file I just haven't gotten around to setting up, was kind of taking a break. I'll work on it tonight and see if I can get it ready. ETA: I now have it in PDF version. Those wishing to get a copy, please send a message to me via the site. |
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Originally Posted By polarbare:
Any teasers for the plot (like they have on book covers)? Closest thing I can come up with is part of the prologue and a few ideas. America, much less the world was unprepared for the events of the early 21st century. After years of continuing debt and inflation, global political polarization and balkanization of nations around the world, conflicts in every region, devastation from Mother Nature the likes never seen before; the “civilized” world has a long fall ahead, nobody knew when, how or even if, but make no mistake, the fall would come like a meteor crashing into the earth. With the world’s economies tangled together like fishing nets, one country could set in motion a series of events which would plunge the world into chaos. One man did... “It is time.” Words that are spoken and the world suddenly changes. Devastating terrorist attacks in the United States and around the world brings about the collapse of society, helped along the way with ambitious politicians, religious fanatics and business leaders. America is no longer what it used to be and the world follows. A group of friends in Colorado have come together to escape the madness sweeping the planet in hopes to survive, but can they change quickly enough to the changing situation? Follow their journey during the Fall as they attempt to make their lives normal again and stand as one against what the world throws their way. |
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Just as a reminder, the entire story is posted here on ARFCOM in this thread for those not wishing to register on FS.
http://www.ar15.com/forums/topic.html?b=10&f=20&t=622823 I can't make the link hot since for some reason I cannot go directly to the site anymore and have to go through a proxy server to post. |
WOW!!! I've apparently been banned from Fruggal's!!! No reason listed, and never to be reinstated!! WTF!? I don't have a fucking CLUE what I did to piss him off, but what an ASSHOLE!!!! The least he could do is let me know WHY.