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Link Posted: 1/8/2019 1:06:12 AM EDT
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Originally Posted By Sev89:
Well damn. I had wondered what happened to nikky lee

Not the kind of guy I'd imagine would get locked in a freezer in a bar....
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Right!  It has to be an interesting story.
Link Posted: 1/8/2019 12:22:03 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By DFARM:
Right!  It has to be an interesting story.
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Originally Posted By DFARM:
Originally Posted By Sev89:
Well damn. I had wondered what happened to nikky lee

Not the kind of guy I'd imagine would get locked in a freezer in a bar....
Right!  It has to be an interesting story.
He seemed pretty capable. Shit happens though...
Link Posted: 1/8/2019 8:45:05 PM EDT
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Edit assist @sharkman6

Chapter 19

In the paragraph:
"No, you don't know about the trads, do you, Spartans. You should. You made them. Made them with that damn bomb of yours. You thought you could get one over on the doctor, on our Great Father. "

I believe you meant mods, not trads?

Thanks for the update! You always bring us the very best violence!
Link Posted: 1/8/2019 8:53:53 PM EDT
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"Because people are fucked up," Christian said. He popped the top of a can of energy drink. The can was warm from the heat of the sun and sitting inside Christian's colossal rucksack. The grenadier gulped it happily. Then he spat a stream of dip spit into the can, sloshed it around to mix it with the last of the warm energy drink, and downed the last of it.
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PS Christian is just fuckin' nasty
Link Posted: 1/9/2019 5:30:16 AM EDT
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Originally Posted By Frosty451:
PS Christian is just fuckin' nasty
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Originally Posted By Frosty451:
"Because people are fucked up," Christian said. He popped the top of a can of energy drink. The can was warm from the heat of the sun and sitting inside Christian's colossal rucksack. The grenadier gulped it happily. Then he spat a stream of dip spit into the can, sloshed it around to mix it with the last of the warm energy drink, and downed the last of it.
PS Christian is just fuckin' nasty
He's a real life pig pen - mutant from Futurama - dumpster fire hybrid
Link Posted: 1/14/2019 8:28:55 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By Sev89:
He's a real life pig pen - mutant from Futurama - dumpster fire hybrid
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Originally Posted By Frosty451:
"Because people are fucked up," Christian said. He popped the top of a can of energy drink. The can was warm from the heat of the sun and sitting inside Christian's colossal rucksack. The grenadier gulped it happily. Then he spat a stream of dip spit into the can, sloshed it around to mix it with the last of the warm energy drink, and downed the last of it.
PS Christian is just fuckin' nasty
He's a real life pig pen - mutant from Futurama - dumpster fire hybrid
There is one in every unit.
Link Posted: 1/14/2019 8:30:03 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By greyguy:

He seemed pretty capable. Shit happens though...
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What's the saying, better to be lucky than good?
Link Posted: 1/14/2019 8:31:02 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By Frosty451:
Edit assist @sharkman6

Chapter 19

In the paragraph:
"No, you don't know about the trads, do you, Spartans. You should. You made them. Made them with that damn bomb of yours. You thought you could get one over on the doctor, on our Great Father. "

I believe you meant mods, not trads?

Thanks for the update! You always bring us the very best violence!
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Thanks for the assist.  My dyslexia got the better of me again.  I keep mixing mods and trads up.

More violence is coming.
Link Posted: 1/15/2019 12:29:14 PM EDT
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More violence is coming.
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Originally Posted By sharkman6:

More violence is coming.
Good news!

Originally Posted By sharkman6:

What's the saying, better to be lucky than good?
I struggle with both...
Link Posted: 1/15/2019 2:15:54 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By sharkman6:

Thanks for the assist.  My dyslexia got the better of me again.  I keep mixing mods and trads up.

More violence is coming.
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YAY!
Link Posted: 1/15/2019 6:52:48 PM EDT
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I'm in!!!!!!!!!!!
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 8:51:25 AM EDT
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Chapter 20 is up.

We're at a total of 173 pages (in word doc) and 83,249 total words!
Thanks for sticking with it!
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 11:29:04 AM EDT
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Thanks for the chapter.  Always wandered about Nicky.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 11:57:53 AM EDT
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Chapter 20 edit assist @sharkman6

"We need to get out of here quick, before more of these Fish-men, or trads, or whatever they are, show up."

Dxsleyia strikes again
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 12:10:39 PM EDT
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Thanks for the update.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 1:34:16 PM EDT
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"It is," Lefranc replied. "But I'll tell you what. That Fish-man in the bar I shot of the side of his face off, stabbed him about a dozen times, chopped him apart with my axe, and still, it wasn't until I took the top half of his skull off that he actually died. No disrespect to our good doctor, but that wasn't any icky-tee-osis. That thing might not have been a fish, but it wasn't human either. If there are more of those things running around here, things are libel liable to get dicey."

Outstanding story as usual!
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 1:58:56 PM EDT
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Great chapter!

I'll have to go back and read in the last march, but I thought that while Nikky Lee was talking with the colonol at the gas station before he passed him the seax and ran off he had said that he was from the East. I believe it was something along the lines of "you Spartans weren't the only ones to look towards where the sun sets and think they are wrong"

I could be way off, I haven't read it in a while.  Please disregard if I am. Lol
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 4:55:29 PM EDT
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Incredible chapter!!!!
But goddammit did Master Guns take the .45 or the 9???????????????????????????
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 5:38:55 PM EDT
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Good read. Got anymore of them chapters?
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 5:45:11 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By 300rum:
Incredible chapter!!!!
But goddammit did Master Guns take the .45 or the 9???????????????????????????
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The .45 of course.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 5:58:51 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By Frosty451:
Chapter 20 edit assist @sharkman6

"We need to get out of here quick, before more of these Fish-men, or trads, or whatever they are, show up."

Dxsleyia strikes again
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Crap.

I may have to rename the two factions in the final draft.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 6:00:59 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By 300rum:
Incredible chapter!!!!
But goddammit did Master Guns take the .45 or the 9???????????????????????????
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I put that in there just for AR15.com.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 6:01:32 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By JoshAston:
"It is," Lefranc replied. "But I'll tell you what. That Fish-man in the bar I shot of the side of his face off, stabbed him about a dozen times, chopped him apart with my axe, and still, it wasn't until I took the top half of his skull off that he actually died. No disrespect to our good doctor, but that wasn't any icky-tee-osis. That thing might not have been a fish, but it wasn't human either. If there are more of those things running around here, things are libel liable to get dicey."

Outstanding story as usual!
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Thanks for the assist.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 6:03:23 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By DFARM:
Great chapter!

I'll have to go back and read in the last march, but I thought that while Nikky Lee was talking with the colonol at the gas station before he passed him the seax and ran off he had said that he was from the East. I believe it was something along the lines of "you Spartans weren't the only ones to look towards where the sun sets and think they are wrong"

I could be way off, I haven't read it in a while.  Please disregard if I am. Lol
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In the first book I was kinda making NL up as I went along, but that plan all along (If I remember correctly) was he was from the fictional state of Jefferson.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 7:27:53 PM EDT
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'you take what you want and leave the rest, just like your salad bar.'

Lefranc grimaced and replied "I thought what we were here, racial differences notwithstanding, was just a couple of old friends. You know, just both of us Californians."

Outfreakingstanding.
Link Posted: 1/19/2019 8:49:56 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By Vaquero:
'you take what you want and leave the rest, just like your salad bar.'

Lefranc grimaced and replied "I thought what we were here, racial differences notwithstanding, was just a couple of old friends. You know, just both of us Californians."

Outfreakingstanding.
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Its all in the reflexes.
Link Posted: 1/21/2019 7:42:01 PM EDT
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Thanks for the update.  I was always curious about Nicky-Lee in the last book too.  Cool stuff!
Link Posted: 2/3/2019 10:26:59 AM EDT
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Chapter 21 is up.
Link Posted: 2/3/2019 12:55:48 PM EDT
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Thanks for the update
Link Posted: 2/3/2019 2:59:38 PM EDT
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Wow. Just wow.
Link Posted: 2/3/2019 8:26:29 PM EDT
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Killer update.  Thanks.
Link Posted: 2/5/2019 11:43:00 PM EDT
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The plot thickens.

I hope it's not chosen that's still alive. I hate that "guy". Lol

Thanks for the update!
Link Posted: 2/6/2019 9:35:41 AM EDT
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Two of the ten guards were shot. One was straggled strangled and another stabbed to death.
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Link Posted: 2/6/2019 6:32:15 PM EDT
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DM:  Thanks for the editing assist!
Link Posted: 2/7/2019 10:03:06 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By DFARM:
The plot thickens.

I hope it's not chosen that's still alive. I hate that "guy". Lol

Thanks for the update!
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The Colonel broke his neck, iirc. I doubt it.

My guess is they are referring to the Colt.
Link Posted: 2/7/2019 10:14:01 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By Frosty451:

The Colonel broke his neck, iirc. I doubt it.

My guess is they are referring to the Colt.
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I remember the colonol getting pretty hands on right at the end. Lol

I didn't think about the other group.  You're probably right. Lol
Link Posted: 3/1/2019 1:31:33 AM EDT
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Chapter 22 is up.
Link Posted: 3/1/2019 11:35:16 AM EDT
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That was awesome!
Link Posted: 3/2/2019 1:37:05 AM EDT
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Chapter 22 is up.
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Awesome chapter!
Thanks!

Any idea about when we can buy it yet?
Link Posted: 3/2/2019 7:42:45 AM EDT
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Originally Posted By DFARM:

Awesome chapter!
Thanks!

Any idea about when we can buy it yet?
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Still gonna be awhile. Moving again the end of Spring.  That always throws a delay into any ambitions.
Link Posted: 3/2/2019 11:53:04 AM EDT
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Great update!  That one was action packed.  Thanks!

Link Posted: 3/2/2019 11:21:55 PM EDT
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Thanks for the new chapter!

When do we get more about curvey Cora?
Link Posted: 3/3/2019 10:36:25 AM EDT
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Thanks for the update.
Link Posted: 5/1/2019 9:31:59 PM EDT
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Is this thing still on?

Link Posted: 5/4/2019 12:20:59 AM EDT
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Still around.  I'll have something out this week.
Link Posted: 5/4/2019 11:23:39 AM EDT
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Originally Posted By sharkman6:
Still around.  I'll have something out this week.
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Link Posted: 5/4/2019 11:51:20 PM EDT
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Link Posted: 5/4/2019 11:54:14 PM EDT
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Originally Posted By sharkman6:
Still around.  I'll have something out this week.
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Cool, thanks.
Link Posted: 5/9/2019 5:08:44 PM EDT
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Chapter 23 is up.
Link Posted: 5/9/2019 6:04:38 PM EDT
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Chapter 23 is up.
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Awesome update. Thanks and keep writing please.
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