If you're just looking for criticism, I've got some to share. Oh yeah, and for the LAST time, quit using "your" where the contraction "you're" is needed (it means YOU ARE). That's only the tip of the tip of the tip of the iceberg. You know, like the difference between "their," "there," and "they're," or "lose" and "loose." GOD ALMIGHTY THAT PISSES ME OFF!!! Did NO ONE EVER attend school? The last I knew, English (or is it Engrish to some?) was taught for the entire twelve years of secondary schools.