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Posted: 11/2/2006 7:54:49 AM EST
Okay, ronmann has been posting some amusing stories from his day to day life in a run down urban city. He's endured untold attacks, humiliations, and other bizzare events.

The problem is this: we're about 50 - 50 if he should correct his prose with proper grammar, spelling, sentence and paragraph structure.

Here's a link to read a sample: ronmann's urban adventures

Should he alter his prose style?

Or, should he get stuck in Irak, or no?
Link Posted: 11/2/2006 8:00:49 AM EST
i dont know. i kinda like the storys. maby a weekly thing where he shares his little slice of the world with us. Its rather refreshing and eye opoening.. Heck I never knew what a chicken head was, but now im looking for them! w00t!
Link Posted: 11/2/2006 8:04:23 AM EST

Originally Posted By Fat_McNasty:
Heck I never knew what a chicken head was, but now im looking for them! w00t!


Me too! w00t!

I say leave the guy be.
All I'd like to request from him is paragraphs, I can deal with the spelling.
Link Posted: 11/2/2006 8:15:49 AM EST

Originally Posted By Fat_McNasty:
i dont know. i kinda like the storys. maby a weekly thing where he shares his little slice of the world with us. Its rather refreshing and eye opoening.. Heck I never knew what a chicken head was, but now im looking for them! w00t!


I should have figured a response like this from you!

This was supposed to be a literary discussion.

Please sit at the back of the class Mr. Fat_McNasty.

IRAK FOR YOU!


Link Posted: 11/2/2006 8:21:19 AM EST
we really needed a thread about this

and no, i like his stories.
Link Posted: 11/2/2006 8:22:01 AM EST
[Last Edit: 11/2/2006 8:22:38 AM EST by DanishM1Garand]

Originally Posted By 1BMF:
Are you kidding me? I love this guys writing; it's like boomhauer on meth.



Link Posted: 11/2/2006 8:23:19 AM EST

Originally Posted By ReelVirginian1861:

Originally Posted By Fat_McNasty:
i dont know. i kinda like the storys. maby a weekly thing where he shares his little slice of the world with us. Its rather refreshing and eye opoening.. Heck I never knew what a chicken head was, but now im looking for them! w00t!


I should have figured a response like this from you!

This was supposed to be a literary discussion.

Please sit at the back of the class Mr. Fat_McNasty.

IRAK FOR YOU!




Link Posted: 11/2/2006 8:24:37 AM EST
[Last Edit: 11/2/2006 8:24:37 AM EST by thebeekeeper1]
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