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Posted: 5/21/2002 8:49:53 AM EST
Give it your best shot.  Here are a few to get you started.

Radio crackles
Tangos spotted in food court
This could get messy

Teenage hooligans
Harrassing the customers
I descend from the ceiling

Hands on your head, punk
Drop the Hilfiger jacket
My team shoots to kill

Link Posted: 5/21/2002 9:16:18 AM EST
Ninjas are so cool
and by cool I mean their sweet
I just crapped my pants
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 11:01:22 AM EST
Ninjas are mammals
But sometimes they just flip out
And cut off your head

[Edited to correct it 5-7-5]
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 12:39:47 PM EST
I love Mall Ninjas
yes with all of my body
even my pee pee
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 12:45:17 PM EST
shoplifter identified
.50 caliber justice
cleanup in front of Sears
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 12:45:52 PM EST
I will wait calmly
They pass me like a river
Three Oh Eight ends crime
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 12:52:08 PM EST
ever vigilant
looking at the T and A
time to act
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 12:55:59 PM EST
Duct Tape on my Skin
Very Bad Planning from Me
Trauma Plate Works Well
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 1:04:18 PM EST
I confront the Crip
"Sir, turn around your ball cap"
Come to in dumpster
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 1:11:35 PM EST
Strut Like a Big Man
Free Fries from the Chick-Fil-A
Teenage Girls are Nice
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 1:37:24 PM EST
Campaign cover and starched shirt
I'm cool, dude
See how fast I draw my mace
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 1:38:47 PM EST
Humvee in Monkey Wards
Dust settles
Ready to Rock I move out
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 1:45:04 PM EST
Too tight in my blues
Mall walk, regulation shoes
Flashlight bangs my thigh.
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 2:21:31 PM EST
The wind does not blow
Shoplifter is still and near
Sight picture, slack, squeeze
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 2:29:07 PM EST
Did I leave the George Forman grill on?

O-crap! there goes another moble home[>(]
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 2:31:25 PM EST
No, Sharper Image
My nostril hairs are just fine
Ahhh... Spencer Gifts.
Link Posted: 5/21/2002 2:36:51 PM EST
I curse the cheap claws
As I fall from the mall roof
my chute deploys late

My golf cart hums sweet
Fifty cal mounted behind
tires squeal on marble

Trauma plates taped on
I confront the heathen crowd
and they know nothing
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 6:22:31 AM EST
Old ladies with blue hair
Walk so slow
Young punks with silly clothes
Rude and loud
Please save me,
Mall Ninja!
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 6:27:25 AM EST
Laser rangefinder
My prey at one fifty yards
The Donut Hut babe
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 6:42:58 AM EST
3pm, my shift at last
The heat from the cafe court clouds my IR goggles.
I as approach fast,
The thermal image paints her hot snatch.

My combat boots clack
my step and persception fine
I removed my goggles to eye
a ruge bodacious rack
and by bodacious, I mean boobylicious!
I flank to the right
to catch a new sight
this baby's got back!

She hooks me up with some fries.
I knew I had the chance
then she asked me to dance
to late, I had crapped my pants.

Link Posted: 5/22/2002 6:47:40 AM EST
Polyester Pants
CB Flashlight Black Shoes Go!
Shoplift at own risk.
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 6:51:04 AM EST

Although some of your submissions are certainly entertaining.  Many do not fit the parameters of haiku.  The pattern of syllables is 5,7,5.  If you look at the first three haiku(s?), you will see they fit this convention.  

Police school dropout
If only they saw me now
Shogun of retail!

(Edited.  There's a big difference between syllables and consonants)
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 6:59:58 AM EST
Rapid deployment
MP5 sings its sweet song
Fountain coins are safe
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 7:21:16 AM EST
I thought 5,7,5 was syllables, but mall haikus may be consonants.
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 7:30:15 AM EST
Ohhhhhh!, I see.
Let me try again:

Ninja on the prowl
Eyes himself some fresh booty
Craps his pants again
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 7:40:41 AM EST
My name is mall ninja Fife
My guns are all rusty, my knife is all dusty
And I never made an arrest in my life
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 7:45:19 AM EST
My name is mall ninja Fife
My guns are all rusty, my knife is all dusty
And I never made an arrest in my life
View Quote

That's a LIMERICK!  
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 8:09:25 AM EST

from limerick......

[b]there once was a ninja oh yeah!
who thought he was badder than hell.
he climbed up the wall
at the top he said, " 'tis too tall!"
and he lost his low wage job at the mall.[/b]

to haiku......

[b]mall ninja climb wall
his back feels intense pain...
unemployment line.[/b]

Link Posted: 5/22/2002 8:36:49 AM EST
.300 whisper
Throw smoke grenades for cover
food court sniper down

trauma plate in front
how to secure dorsal plate?
GlockTalk has answers
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 3:08:42 PM EST
Gangsta wannabe
Trousers slung below his waist
Death touch stops his heart
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 3:12:49 PM EST
Gap chick folding shirts
Closer in my reticle
Finger strokes trigger
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 3:31:32 PM EST
Within the shadows
Hidden eyes scanning, scanning
The Mall is now safe
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 3:49:32 PM EST
keen senses say strike
throwing stars cast in flurry
now Orange Julius
Link Posted: 5/22/2002 6:26:27 PM EST
I applaud you all
your best efforts might be lame
but it all rings true

I can't write haiku
certainly not about Gecko
while you have done well

Of course, these haiku
will be archived at my site
mall ninjas rejoice

Verse, a true homage
to the gaurdians of malls
who can criticize?

After all, you shoot-
writing certainly not your
strongest of subjects[;)]

has new material
will I now update?

Link Posted: 5/22/2002 7:15:16 PM EST
Clad in black, I strike!
In the video arcade
Bloody quarters fly
Link Posted: 5/23/2002 10:53:10 AM EST
The armored car guys
Carry guns into my mall
Why can't I have one?

A shoplifter caught
Police come and pick him up
I NEED to be one.
Link Posted: 5/23/2002 11:10:56 AM EST
Adipose quivers,
Polyester uniform,
Fired for sleeping

Shoplifter stop now!
I hurl my fierce shuriken,
Too fat to run fast.

Mexican, Chinese?
The food court confuses me.
Puff of smoke, I'm gone.

I have no pistol.
Black clad,  I blend with mall map.
Silent ,I thwart evil.

Quickly to the arcade!
Two malcontents battle there,
Photos, then banished.
Link Posted: 5/23/2002 11:17:53 AM EST
Read SOF ad
Send check for ancient manual
Training is complete
Link Posted: 5/23/2002 11:45:47 AM EST
Mall Ninja flips out
Cut off paying customer's head
Cleans toilet for life.

Board members love me
All their body and peepee
Mall Ninja not gay
Link Posted: 6/4/2002 3:42:19 PM EST
Jojo rappels down
Class IV plates tugging duct tape
Waldenbooks is safe
Link Posted: 6/4/2002 4:40:06 PM EST
Mall Ninja?

Don't get this shit.
High School dork on power trip?
Dressed in black.
Chick-Fil-A gives him gas?
Mall Ninja let em rip.
Link Posted: 6/4/2002 5:09:48 PM EST
The Womenz walk by
Ninja low crawls through the mall
Perv alert! eek! Eek!

I am Mall Ninja
School girls slap decal on me
Hello Kitty sucks!

Vigilent Ninja
Sees the nastiest habits
On booger patrol
Link Posted: 6/4/2002 5:34:31 PM EST
Totally sweet?  Yes.
Totally tactical?  Yes.
The mall ninja rules!
Link Posted: 6/4/2002 5:45:40 PM EST
See the girl Ninja!
Mall Ninja peepee gets wood
Maybe NOT confused

Link Posted: 6/4/2002 6:15:38 PM EST
McUzi is back
Mall Ninja, not a Big Mac
GoatBoy cut some slack
Link Posted: 6/4/2002 6:38:59 PM EST
Mall Ninja sound like "RAP"?
Link Posted: 6/5/2002 9:19:41 AM EST
Wall climbing shoes on
I love watching little girls
Like a God I am

Ballistic plates on
Front and back they protect me
Glock 9 at ready

Golf cart turbocharged
The litterbugs I hunt down
Hollowpoint head shot

Respect me you will
For great wrath shall I call down
On my megaphone

Special Ops wannabes
Hold no candle to my skills
Mall Ninja am I
Link Posted: 6/5/2002 9:48:45 AM EST
night vision engaged
ruckus at sharper image
silenced round makes peace

enjoying slurpee
peace disturbed by teen mallrats
brass bounces off tile

watching birds nest above
hanging from skylight, see all
lonely at the top

taco bell for lunch
loud bitch orders big mac, fry
too stupid to read
Link Posted: 6/5/2002 10:40:06 AM EST
Fifty cal goes boom
Elevator needs cleaning
Store gets back their goods

All this cool hardware
No need for any training
I can walk on walls!
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