Posted: 4/25/2017 4:56:03 PM EDT
[Last Edit: J75player][Edited]
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Maybe remove a bit of clutter and redistribute the colors. You're trying to break up recognizable outlines, not trying out for a part as chewbacca (clutter).
To my eye you've created vertical and horizontal lines with the black strips. I'd ditch those and use a more neutral earth tone color and don't use such wide strips and use fewer of the strips. For a hat, sew a boonie onto a ball cap. The bill of the ball cap is good for holding a ghillie flap over the top of your optic when you wear the ball cap properly and when you wear it backwards for walking around the ghillie flap covers your neck preventing sunburn and keeping ticks/chiggers/mosquitos off your neck. I didn't think of the above hat thing originally. Someone else here on barfcom did and it turned out to be a wicked good idea. So credits go to whomever here originally thought of it. |

