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AKASL Joined Nov 2000 Posts 581 EE 100% (72) TX, USA	Posted: 4/16/2008 1:13:42 PM EDT [#1] Thanks for the Update!! Keep the story going AKASL LIVE FREE OR DIE

Cantshootstrate Joined Dec 2003 Posts 92 EE 100% (129) USA	Posted: 4/28/2008 12:25:22 PM EDT [#2] It's really good writing, and the hook in the front makes me want to read more.

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 194 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 5/5/2008 1:09:08 AM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#3] 08/29/08

Gary_P Average Joe Joined Sep 2003 Posts 987 EE 100% (9) SC, USA	Posted: 5/5/2008 8:58:58 AM EDT [#4] HA! and the story continues!!!
	"My fellow Americans, I am pleased to announce that France has been outlawed forever. The bombing begins in five minutes." كافر

Shane333

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Posted: 5/5/2008 11:40:55 AM EDT

[#5]

Originally Posted By Gary_P:
HA!

and the story continues!!!

Thank goodness. I was concerned that it was going to fade away unfinished.

In memory of our God, our religion, and freedom, and our peace, our wives, and our children

-Captain Moroni
72 B.C.

cntrolsguy Member Joined Mar 2005 Posts 50 EE 0% (0) CA, USA	Posted: 5/5/2008 12:48:54 PM EDT [#6] Good work so far!

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 195 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 5/8/2008 12:21:47 PM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#7] 08/31/08

Srigs Joined Jul 2005 Posts 1165 EE 0% (0) MN, USA	Posted: 5/8/2008 4:45:48 PM EDT [#8] Great updates. I can't wait for more days so I can see how he finishes off the

mustangracer Joined Oct 2002 Posts 1156 EE 100% (18) MO, USA	Posted: 5/8/2008 6:58:50 PM EDT [#9] Awesome story so far, keep up the great work!

psgt Joined Apr 2008 Posts 12 EE 100% (13) NY, USA	Posted: 5/10/2008 1:26:55 PM EDT [#10] Great story. When is the next installment.

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 196 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 5/10/2008 6:27:50 PM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#11] 09/01/08 morning

Gripy Joined Apr 2007 Posts 288 EE 0% (0) CA, USA	Posted: 5/11/2008 7:01:21 PM EDT [#12] Good work!

KOW Member Joined Jul 2002 Posts 677 EE 100% (6) CT, USA	Posted: 5/11/2008 7:36:51 PM EDT [#13] Good story. Nice gritty feel.

psgt Joined Apr 2008 Posts 43 EE 100% (13) NY, USA	Posted: 5/11/2008 8:35:39 PM EDT [#14] I need my fix

vengarr Member Joined May 2005 Posts 2368 EE 100% (157) KY, USA	Posted: 5/11/2008 9:05:09 PM EDT [#15] very cool so far, I am hooked.
	I would just as soon make you cry as make you laugh, both are equally entertaining to me----me!

mustangracer Joined Oct 2002 Posts 1162 EE 100% (18) MO, USA	Posted: 5/12/2008 6:25:46 AM EDT [#16] Awesome!

lildegen Joined Oct 2002 Posts 456 EE 100% (1) FL, USA	Posted: 5/13/2008 1:30:41 AM EDT [#17] Thank you

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 197 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 5/13/2008 3:00:57 AM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#18] 09/02/08 morning

mustangracer Joined Oct 2002 Posts 1164 EE 100% (18) MO, USA	Posted: 5/13/2008 1:05:10 PM EDT [#19] Thanks!

sfeem Member Joined Nov 2005 Posts 212 EE 0% (0) OK, USA	Posted: 5/13/2008 1:18:37 PM EDT [#20] tag
	I aint got time to bleed... but I do have time to duck.

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 198 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 5/18/2008 11:39:11 AM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#21] 09/02/08 evening

Morg308 Member Joined May 2006 Posts 1230 EE 100% (208) AZ, USA	Posted: 5/18/2008 12:42:33 PM EDT [#22] Good, solid writing. Very publishable IMO. I like the realism - well, as realistic as a zombie story can be! Keep up the good work!

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 199 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 5/18/2008 7:52:53 PM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#23] 09/03/08 morning

ferretrodeo Member Joined May 2006 Posts 597 EE 100% (4) AL, USA	Posted: 5/19/2008 1:02:20 AM EDT [#24] Tag

blaster1016 Joined Jan 2008 Posts 13 EE 0% (0) TN, USA	Posted: 5/19/2008 5:51:52 PM EDT [#25] Good story I need more!

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 201 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 5/20/2008 8:02:53 PM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#26] 09/05/08 Morning

Shane333 Member Joined May 2003 Posts 15052 EE 100% (13) UT, USA	Posted: 5/21/2008 12:03:00 PM EDT [#27]
	In memory of our God, our religion, and freedom, and our peace, our wives, and our children -Captain Moroni 72 B.C.

mustangracer Joined Oct 2002 Posts 1180 EE 100% (18) MO, USA	Posted: 5/21/2008 1:05:15 PM EDT [#28] Holy CRAP! great addition.

AKASL Joined Nov 2000 Posts 594 EE 100% (72) TX, USA	Posted: 5/21/2008 1:16:49 PM EDT [#29] shadrach, The suspense is killing me ................ DONT KEEP US HANGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! J/K Great story AKASL LIVE FREE OR DIE

rvogster Joined Oct 2004 Posts 583 EE 100% (2) OH, USA	Posted: 5/29/2008 10:10:34 AM EDT [#30] This is great! Keep up the good work!

blaster1016 Joined Jan 2008 Posts 14 EE 0% (0) TN, USA	Posted: 5/29/2008 12:12:33 PM EDT [#31] Oh come on wheres the rest!

shadrach Joined Jan 2005 Posts 203 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 6/1/2008 1:12:45 AM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#32] 09/06/08 Evening

Lautlos Joined Apr 2004 Posts 9 EE 0% (0) KY, USA	Posted: 6/2/2008 11:26:24 AM EDT [#33] I once slept 22 hours straight ... I hated that. I felt terrible though so I guess I needed it. By the way great story one of the few that have grabbed me on here. Keep it up.

Berzerker77

Hebe Light

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Posted: 6/3/2008 8:53:31 AM EDT

[#34]

Originally Posted By Lautlos:
I once slept 22 hours straight ... I hated that. I felt terrible though so I guess I needed it.

By the way great story one of the few that have grabbed me on here. Keep it up.

Lautlos, I know I speak for all of us when I say that we are getting tired of your incessant post whoring. It is unseemly sir!

Awesome story here. I love it.

Always do the right thing.

Lautlos Joined Apr 2004 Posts 10 EE 0% (0) KY, USA	Posted: 6/4/2008 11:54:14 PM EDT [#35] One post a year whether I need it or not.

atrum_tutela nuclear birdshot enthusiast Joined Jun 2006 Posts 769 EE 0% (0) AL, USA	Posted: 6/5/2008 12:56:31 AM EDT [Last Edit: atrum_tutela] [#36] this is awesome ETA: how about a little motivation to keep it going
	If the barrel of your gun pokes below your shorts, then your shorts are probably short enough to give me a view of your nutsack. I don't want to see your balls. Stop this faggotry. -SubnetMask

davis9588 Double tap...show them that you care... Joined Nov 2004 Posts 634 EE 100% (215) MS, USA	Posted: 6/10/2008 1:38:48 PM EDT [#37] C'mon dude! More?!
	Beer, it does a body good... <img src=/images/smilies/anim_beer.gif border=0 align=middle> "May the forces of evil become confused on the way to your house." George Carlin كافر

shadrach Member Joined Jan 2005 Posts 204 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 6/11/2008 7:27:55 AM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#38] 09/08/08 Morning

Shane333 Member Joined May 2003 Posts 15264 EE 100% (13) UT, USA	Posted: 6/11/2008 11:50:59 AM EDT [#39] Woah! Interesting twist.
	In memory of our God, our religion, and freedom, and our peace, our wives, and our children -Captain Moroni 72 B.C.

mustangracer Joined Oct 2002 Posts 1230 EE 100% (18) MO, USA	Posted: 6/11/2008 10:09:59 PM EDT [#40] WOW! great twist!

atrum_tutela nuclear birdshot enthusiast Joined Jun 2006 Posts 781 EE 0% (0) AL, USA	Posted: 6/11/2008 10:32:59 PM EDT [#41] holy shit... I love it.
	If the barrel of your gun pokes below your shorts, then your shorts are probably short enough to give me a view of your nutsack. I don't want to see your balls. Stop this faggotry. -SubnetMask

DallasLooterShooter Joined Oct 2006 Posts 997 EE 100% (238) TX, USA	Posted: 6/12/2008 11:26:37 AM EDT [#42] I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

militantzero

Expanding insurgent minds,one round at a time.

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Posted: 6/12/2008 6:51:18 PM EDT

[#43]

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

+1 that would be Sha-weeet!

"Let's have a party with beer...and chicks...and guns...and fire trucks!"

"To those of us who defend it,life has a special flavor the protected will never know."

"Never fear a man that breathes the same air as you"<BR

redleg13a

Joined Feb 2003
Posts 2076
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OK, USA

Posted: 6/12/2008 7:43:19 PM EDT

[#44]

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Gary_P Average Joe Joined Sep 2003 Posts 1006 EE 100% (9) SC, USA	Posted: 6/12/2008 8:37:14 PM EDT [#45] its gonna get brutal from here boys
	"My fellow Americans, I am pleased to announce that France has been outlawed forever. The bombing begins in five minutes." كافر

DallasLooterShooter

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Posts 1001
EE 100% (238)

TX, USA

Posted: 6/12/2008 8:49:13 PM EDT

[#46]

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Didn't read/don't remember that far back I guess...

redleg13a

Joined Feb 2003
Posts 2077
EE 100% (2)

OK, USA

Posted: 6/13/2008 10:05:09 PM EDT

[#47]

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Didn't read/don't remember that far back I guess...

That's what happens when you get into a story....

DallasLooterShooter

Joined Oct 2006
Posts 1012
EE 100% (238)

TX, USA

Posted: 6/14/2008 2:49:51 AM EDT

[#48]

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Didn't read/don't remember that far back I guess...

That's what happens when you get into a story....

...that only gets updated once a week

I just got through reading Eden, and it only took me 3 days. I really enjoy reading, and have a horrible memory, so I have to read fast and get to the end of the story before I forget what happened

shadrach Member Joined Jan 2005 Posts 206 EE 100% (10) AR, USA	Posted: 6/15/2008 9:51:24 AM EDT [Last Edit: shadrach] [#49] Continued

DallasLooterShooter Joined Oct 2006 Posts 1021 EE 100% (238) TX, USA	Posted: 6/15/2008 9:44:24 PM EDT [#50] Wow, this is like a zombie version of Blade! All the strengths and none of the weaknesses: so far, that is...

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