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8/18/2008 12:07:27 PM EDT
[#1]
Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh Chewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Help, need another chapter.
Don't pick a fight with an old man. If he is too old to fight, he'll just kill you.
8/20/2008 10:08:34 PM EDT
[#2]
Hello I am new here but I have read LO, Lost and Found, and now Dead Reckoning.

You do great work.  Did you know this was the original title for Land of the Dead?

Your story is already better than that movie haha.
8/20/2008 10:55:35 PM EDT
[#3]

Originally Posted By Rcd567:
Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh Chewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Help, need another chapter.


OH, NO!!  Quick, Dr. Halffast!  Another dose of your writing STAT!!  We might lose this one!!




Proud Aunt of the Ranstad's Militia MBG ***Go, 1-91!*** Hoo-ah!

IMHO everyone should wake the hell up and put their damn aluminum hats on. - FlatlinesUp
8/24/2008 3:52:39 AM EDT
[#4]
And when I vest my flashing sword and my hand takes hold in judgment I will take vengeance upon mine enemies And I will repay those who hate me O Lord, raise me to Thy right hand and count me among Thy saints.
8/25/2008 2:16:32 PM EDT
[#5]
Holy crap, how did I ever miss this. Excellent as always HF..... so far.  I'll need about 10-15 chapters or so to give a better opinion.  
Protego quod vallo.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
8/25/2008 10:15:39 PM EDT
[#6]
Bump for a new chapter (hint, hint).
8/25/2008 11:03:46 PM EDT
[#7]
umm, hey, David?  Mr. Halffast, sir?  if you won't post another chapter here, will you at least bring more to the hike in October?  I really, really, really want more.  


Proud Aunt of the Ranstad's Militia MBG ***Go, 1-91!*** Hoo-ah!

IMHO everyone should wake the hell up and put their damn aluminum hats on. - FlatlinesUp
8/30/2008 8:36:40 AM EDT
[#8]
Damn..... another Halffast novel to add to my subscriptions page.

Excellent work, as usual.

Thanks, David!

Michael
It's no longer a question of "if".... it's a question of "when"!
8/31/2008 3:45:49 PM EDT
[#9]
Tag.
America is at that awkward stage where it's too late to change things from within and too early to shoot the bastards.
9/3/2008 5:00:08 PM EDT
[#10]
Thanks for the comments.  I really appreciate them.  Chapter 3 is in the OP.  Please let me know how you feel about it.

David
If you tell the truth, you're going to fail the internet! - Acman145acp

SWT

Proud member of the Hardass 8.

Molon Labe!
9/3/2008 5:06:52 PM EDT
[#11]

Originally Posted By Halffast:
Thanks for the comments.  I really appreciate them.  Chapter 3 is in the OP.  Please let me know how you feel about it.

David


David, Thanks for new chapter.  Talk about a cliffhanger....
9/3/2008 5:29:50 PM EDT
[#12]
Lemme guess.
The movement in the door isn't a traveling weaponsmith pulling a horsedrawn buggy full of NFA gear and thousands of rounds of ammo, is it?
“Is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? Forbid it, Almighty God! I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty or give me death!” .. Patrick Henry
9/3/2008 6:38:23 PM EDT
[#13]
good stuff as always
I only use my guns when kindness fails

SWT

I hope the zombies carry taurus

I'd lick the dirt off that just to get to it

Naaa U ain't hardass8 i was there

My life is a drunken poets dream
9/3/2008 6:51:23 PM EDT
[#14]
Excellent. Noticed a few typoes/grammatical issues, but good non the less.
Protego quod vallo.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
9/3/2008 9:11:56 PM EDT
[#15]
Thanks for the new chapter. I'm lovin' this story!
9/3/2008 9:37:03 PM EDT
[#16]

Originally Posted By sniper69:

Originally Posted By Halffast:
Thanks for the comments.  I really appreciate them.  Chapter 3 is in the OP.  Please let me know how you feel about it.

David


David, Thanks for new chapter.  Talk about a cliffhanger....


definitely!!!!!  great chapter!!!

(and, so now I have to ask...  will you bring the NEXT one to the campout?  )
Proud Aunt of the Ranstad's Militia MBG ***Go, 1-91!*** Hoo-ah!

IMHO everyone should wake the hell up and put their damn aluminum hats on. - FlatlinesUp
9/3/2008 10:10:51 PM EDT
[#17]

Originally Posted By donne3:

Originally Posted By sniper69:

Originally Posted By Halffast:
Thanks for the comments.  I really appreciate them.  Chapter 3 is in the OP.  Please let me know how you feel about it.

David


David, Thanks for new chapter.  Talk about a cliffhanger....


definitely!!!!!  great chapter!!!

(and, so now I have to ask...  will you bring the NEXT one to the campout?  )


I will if it's ready. But only cause you asked so nice.
If you tell the truth, you're going to fail the internet! - Acman145acp

SWT

Proud member of the Hardass 8.

Molon Labe!
9/3/2008 10:33:32 PM EDT
[#18]

Originally Posted By Halffast:
I will if it's ready. But only cause you asked so nice.





thanks, David!!  
Proud Aunt of the Ranstad's Militia MBG ***Go, 1-91!*** Hoo-ah!

IMHO everyone should wake the hell up and put their damn aluminum hats on. - FlatlinesUp
9/3/2008 10:38:29 PM EDT
[#19]
'scribed of course
"The greatest battle implement ever devised" ~ George S. Patton on the M1 Rifle

No bastard ever won a war by dying for his country. He won it by making the other poor dumb bastard die for his country. ~ George S. Patton
9/3/2008 11:28:11 PM EDT
[#20]
you always leave us on the edge of our seats
WE BUILD WE FIGHT...CAN DO
9/4/2008 4:01:58 PM EDT
[#21]
AUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH.  Talk about a cliff hanger.  I hope the next chapter come soon.  Every time I read a new chapter I have to start at the beginning.
9/4/2008 10:00:18 PM EDT
[#22]
What to say? MOOOOOORE!!
10/13/2008 5:48:31 PM EDT
[#23]
Thanks for chapter three.  I'm looking forward to this story.
10/13/2008 11:58:50 PM EDT
[#24]
Great story so far. Keep it up.
10/17/2008 1:49:23 PM EDT
[#25]
more awesome work man
Thanks
10/29/2008 9:00:41 PM EDT
[#26]
David this another terrific story. Speaking from over 45 yrs. of personal experience as a type one diabetic, an insulin dependent diabetic has the odds stacked against them and time isn't on their side. The high blood sugars cause damage to the body and mind as do the low blood sugars. High blood sugars can cause diabetic ketone acidosis resulting in a coma, renal failure, neuropathy, heart attack & stroke not to mention retinopathy which can will lead to blindness. With high blood sugar there is an unquenchable thirst and that would make you want to drink from the nastiest water to get relief. It also causes fatigue and drowsiness  The neuropathy in your feet to me feels like sever sunburn and also a stinging or being stuck by a thousand needles at the same time. Those nerves are working overtime it seems... If you stay busy it may not be as noticeable but not when you relx or try to rest or sleep.

Getting a scrape or cut can lead to an infection which without enough of the right antibiotics can quickly spread & lead to gangrene. Friend of mine's late husband had diabetes and injured his toe which cost him his foot and later the leg and then he killed himself shortly after that. The stench of the infection is terrible and when you lose hope its hard to want to go on.

Keep up the great work. Your friend always, Alan

A frin
11/2/2008 9:56:07 PM EDT
[#27]
Most awesome to see ya back at it again.
I used Lights Out to reach a few folks.
All enjoyed it.
thanks to you my 15 y.o. gets it!!!!!!!!
you've come to take my WHAT?
11/8/2008 9:01:31 PM EDT
[#28]
Bump.

C'mon man, I'm already on chapter eight of my newest story. You too busy to do chapter four?
America is at that awkward stage where it's too late to change things from within and too early to shoot the bastards.
11/8/2008 9:53:22 PM EDT
[#29]
he may be turning......
I talked with him today he didn't sound good.
I only use my guns when kindness fails

SWT

I hope the zombies carry taurus

I'd lick the dirt off that just to get to it

Naaa U ain't hardass8 i was there

My life is a drunken poets dream
11/9/2008 2:41:21 PM EDT
[#30]
Originally Posted By acman145acp:
he may be turning......
I talked with him today he didn't sound good.


What, is he sick? That sucks. Hope he gets better soon.
America is at that awkward stage where it's too late to change things from within and too early to shoot the bastards.
11/12/2008 4:16:23 PM EDT
[#31]
Ready for another chapter!
11/12/2008 9:34:40 PM EDT
[#32]
Originally Posted By gunnutt1:
Most awesome to see ya back at it again.
I used Lights Out to reach a few folks.
All enjoyed it.
thanks to you my 15 y.o. gets it!!!!!!!!


now THAT's a compliment, if ever I've heard one!!!  

I just came in here to say, "Dear Santa, I have been a very good girl this year and would like a new chapter for Christmas.  I know that's a pretty big request, but I have been very, very good, Santa.  I'll make extra cookies this year, too - your favorites: chocolate chip, snickerdoodles and oatmeal-macadamia nut-cherry. I hope your year has gone well and that you are ready to come see me, as I have been very, very, very good.  Love, donne3"

Proud Aunt of the Ranstad's Militia MBG

Now, I'm no longer surprised at the stupidity of criminals (or anyone else) but you've got to be pretty damn stupid to invade a home in Texas. It's like playing the death lottery. - Zan
11/13/2008 7:07:23 PM EDT
[#33]


I just came in here to say, "Dear Santa, I have been a very good girl this year and would like a new chapter for Christmas.  I know that's a pretty big request, but I have been very, very good, Santa.  I'll make extra cookies this year, too - your favorites: chocolate chip, snickerdoodles and oatmeal-macadamia nut-cherry. I hope your year has gone well and that you are ready to come see me, as I have been very, very, very good.  Love, donne3"



I talked to santa earlier and he said U motivated him

I only use my guns when kindness fails

SWT

I hope the zombies carry taurus

I'd lick the dirt off that just to get to it

Naaa U ain't hardass8 i was there

My life is a drunken poets dream
11/17/2008 12:59:45 AM EDT
[#34]
+ 1
11/17/2008 7:29:01 AM EDT
[#35]
Great installment. The suspense it killing me.
Protego quod vallo.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
11/17/2008 8:56:43 PM EDT
[#36]
Great job.
11/17/2008 8:56:48 PM EDT
[#37]
Great job.
11/18/2008 8:17:51 AM EDT
[#38]
Thanks for the update....  more more more.  
I'm mean nasty & tired. I eat concertina wire & piss napalm and I can put a round through a fleas ass at 200 meters.
11/18/2008 9:04:07 AM EDT
[#39]
Originally Posted By acman145acp:
I talked to santa earlier and he said U motivated him



 YAY!!!!  Thanks, Santa!!!    I'll be sure to tell the bunnies that you're really a good guy and that they just should look before crosing the roads.  



Originally Posted By 7:
Thanks for the update....  more more more.  


LOL...  poor David...  yes, please.    awesome chapter - can't wait to see what comes of the new interaction...  hate to say it as soon as you post a new chaper, but more, please.  
Proud Aunt of the Ranstad's Militia MBG

Now, I'm no longer surprised at the stupidity of criminals (or anyone else) but you've got to be pretty damn stupid to invade a home in Texas. It's like playing the death lottery. - Zan
12/9/2008 11:35:11 AM EDT
[#40]
New chapter please.
1/3/2009 10:46:37 PM EDT
[#41]
BTT
America is at that awkward stage where it's too late to change things from within and too early to shoot the bastards.

polarbare is THE MAN.
1/13/2009 4:01:36 PM EDT
[#42]
bumpity bump
1/21/2009 7:45:51 PM EDT
[#43]
Whew, over two months and no fix yet. I'm jonesn' for sure.
1/22/2009 6:32:13 AM EDT
[#44]
Damnit! I swore to myself I wouldn't get hooked on any more stories before they were complete. AR*(#YRHEHTIUSEHTSEHTOIESGIHIO!!!!!!!!!

When's the next one coming out?
1/26/2009 10:25:36 PM EDT
[#45]
please sir. . . may i have some more?
1/29/2009 7:52:44 PM EDT
[Last Edit: WS6_Keith][Edited] [#46]
OK David, what else have you written?  I've read LO, started and finished L&F yesterday, and blew through these chapters today.  I NEED A FIX...where can I turn?



Great stuff - please keep it coming!
Keith-
3/10/2009 3:45:54 PM EDT
[#47]
Sorry it took so long for the new chapter.  Hope you all enjoy it.

David
Me: What do you mean you don't know what shit on a shingle is? You're in the military, aren't you?
Her: Dad...I'm in the Air Force!

SWT and Proud member of the Hardass 8.

Molon Labe!
3/10/2009 6:34:16 PM EDT
[#48]
Man, you do so love to leave one hanging.....  
Protego quod vallo.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
3/10/2009 7:18:13 PM EDT
[#49]
Good stuff!  Ready for more sir!
Keith-
3/10/2009 8:33:33 PM EDT
[#50]
Originally Posted By WS6_Keith:
OK David, what else have you written?  I've read LO, started and finished L&F yesterday, and blew through these chapters today.  I NEED A FIX...where can I turn?



Great stuff - please keep it coming!


The Bug Out  short, but wow...  your mouth is guaranteed to be left hanging open.  


as I said at the campout, the uninfected guy creeps me out...  my "spidey sense" is tingling, but since I'm a little "paranoid," I can't wait to read more and find out if I'm right or wrong...  

more, please.  
Proud Aunt of the Ranstad's Militia MBG

Now, I'm no longer surprised at the stupidity of criminals (or anyone else) but you've got to be pretty damn stupid to invade a home in Texas. It's like playing the death lottery. - Zan

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