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AKASL

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Posted: 4/16/2008 1:13:42 PM EDT

[#1]

Thanks for the Update!! Keep the story going

AKASL

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Cantshootstrate

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Posted: 4/28/2008 12:25:22 PM EDT

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It's really good writing, and the hook in the front makes me want to read more.

shadrach

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Posted: 5/5/2008 1:09:08 AM EDT

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08/29/08

Gary_P

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Posted: 5/5/2008 8:58:58 AM EDT

[#4]

HA!

and the story continues!!!

"My fellow Americans, I am pleased to announce that France has been outlawed forever. The bombing begins in five minutes."

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Shane333

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Posted: 5/5/2008 11:40:55 AM EDT

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Originally Posted By Gary_P:
HA!

and the story continues!!!

Thank goodness. I was concerned that it was going to fade away unfinished.

In memory of our God, our religion, and freedom, and our peace, our wives, and our children

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cntrolsguy

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Posted: 5/5/2008 12:48:54 PM EDT

[#6]

Good work so far!

shadrach

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Posted: 5/8/2008 12:21:47 PM EDT

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08/31/08

Srigs

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Posted: 5/8/2008 4:45:48 PM EDT

[#8]

Great updates. I can't wait for more days so I can see how he finishes off the

mustangracer

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Posted: 5/8/2008 6:58:50 PM EDT

[#9]

Awesome story so far, keep up the great work!

psgt

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Posted: 5/10/2008 1:26:55 PM EDT

[#10]

Great story. When is the next installment.

shadrach

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Posted: 5/10/2008 6:27:50 PM EDT

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09/01/08 morning

Gripy

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Posted: 5/11/2008 7:01:21 PM EDT

[#12]

Good work!

KOW

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Posted: 5/11/2008 7:36:51 PM EDT

[#13]

Good story. Nice gritty feel.

psgt

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Posted: 5/11/2008 8:35:39 PM EDT

[#14]

I need my fix

vengarr

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Posted: 5/11/2008 9:05:09 PM EDT

[#15]

very cool so far, I am hooked.

I would just as soon make you cry as make you laugh, both are equally entertaining to me----me!

mustangracer

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Posted: 5/12/2008 6:25:46 AM EDT

[#16]

Awesome!

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Posted: 5/13/2008 1:30:41 AM EDT

[#17]

Thank you

shadrach

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Posted: 5/13/2008 3:00:57 AM EDT

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09/02/08 morning

mustangracer

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Posted: 5/13/2008 1:05:10 PM EDT

[#19]

Thanks!

sfeem

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Posted: 5/13/2008 1:18:37 PM EDT

[#20]

tag

I aint got time to bleed... but I do have time to duck.

shadrach

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Posted: 5/18/2008 11:39:11 AM EDT

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09/02/08 evening

Morg308

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Posted: 5/18/2008 12:42:33 PM EDT

[#22]

Good, solid writing. Very publishable IMO. I like the realism - well, as realistic as a zombie story can be! Keep up the good work!

shadrach

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Posted: 5/18/2008 7:52:53 PM EDT

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09/03/08 morning

ferretrodeo

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Posted: 5/19/2008 1:02:20 AM EDT

[#24]

Tag

blaster1016

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Posted: 5/19/2008 5:51:52 PM EDT

[#25]

Good story I need more!

shadrach

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Posted: 5/20/2008 8:02:53 PM EDT

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09/05/08 Morning

Shane333

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Posted: 5/21/2008 12:03:00 PM EDT

[#27]

In memory of our God, our religion, and freedom, and our peace, our wives, and our children

-Captain Moroni
72 B.C.

mustangracer

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Posted: 5/21/2008 1:05:15 PM EDT

[#28]

Holy CRAP! great addition.

AKASL

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Posted: 5/21/2008 1:16:49 PM EDT

[#29]

shadrach,

The suspense is killing me ................ DONT KEEP US HANGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

J/K Great story

AKASL

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Posted: 5/29/2008 10:10:34 AM EDT

[#30]

This is great! Keep up the good work!

blaster1016

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Posted: 5/29/2008 12:12:33 PM EDT

[#31]

Oh come on wheres the rest!

shadrach

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Posted: 6/1/2008 1:12:45 AM EDT

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09/06/08 Evening

Lautlos

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Posted: 6/2/2008 11:26:24 AM EDT

[#33]

I once slept 22 hours straight ... I hated that. I felt terrible though so I guess I needed it.

By the way great story one of the few that have grabbed me on here. Keep it up.

Berzerker77

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Posted: 6/3/2008 8:53:31 AM EDT

[#34]

Originally Posted By Lautlos:
I once slept 22 hours straight ... I hated that. I felt terrible though so I guess I needed it.

By the way great story one of the few that have grabbed me on here. Keep it up.

Lautlos, I know I speak for all of us when I say that we are getting tired of your incessant post whoring. It is unseemly sir!

Awesome story here. I love it.

Always do the right thing.

Lautlos

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Posted: 6/4/2008 11:54:14 PM EDT

[#35]

One post a year whether I need it or not.

atrum_tutela

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Posted: 6/5/2008 12:56:31 AM EDT

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this is awesome

ETA: how about a little motivation to keep it going

If the barrel of your gun pokes below your shorts, then your shorts are probably short enough to give me a view of your nutsack. I don't want to see your balls. Stop this faggotry.

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davis9588

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Posted: 6/10/2008 1:38:48 PM EDT

[#37]

C'mon dude!

More?!

Beer, it does a body good...
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"May the forces of evil become confused on the way to your house."
George Carlin

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shadrach

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Posted: 6/11/2008 7:27:55 AM EDT

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09/08/08 Morning

Shane333

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Posted: 6/11/2008 11:50:59 AM EDT

[#39]

Woah! Interesting twist.

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-Captain Moroni
72 B.C.

mustangracer

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Posted: 6/11/2008 10:09:59 PM EDT

[#40]

WOW! great twist!

atrum_tutela

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Posted: 6/11/2008 10:32:59 PM EDT

[#41]

holy shit...

I love it.

If the barrel of your gun pokes below your shorts, then your shorts are probably short enough to give me a view of your nutsack. I don't want to see your balls. Stop this faggotry.

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DallasLooterShooter

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Posted: 6/12/2008 11:26:37 AM EDT

[#42]

I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

militantzero

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Posted: 6/12/2008 6:51:18 PM EDT

[#43]

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

+1 that would be Sha-weeet!

"Let's have a party with beer...and chicks...and guns...and fire trucks!"

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"Never fear a man that breathes the same air as you"<BR

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Posted: 6/12/2008 7:43:19 PM EDT

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Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Gary_P

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Posted: 6/12/2008 8:37:14 PM EDT

[#45]

its gonna get brutal from here boys

"My fellow Americans, I am pleased to announce that France has been outlawed forever. The bombing begins in five minutes."

كافر

DallasLooterShooter

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Posted: 6/12/2008 8:49:13 PM EDT

[#46]

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Didn't read/don't remember that far back I guess...

redleg13a

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Posted: 6/13/2008 10:05:09 PM EDT

[#47]

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Didn't read/don't remember that far back I guess...

That's what happens when you get into a story....

DallasLooterShooter

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Posted: 6/14/2008 2:49:51 AM EDT

[#48]

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:

Originally Posted By redleg13a:

Originally Posted By DallasLooterShooter:
I'm really hoping he turns out to be a zombified zombie killer!

That's what's implied in the first post. The soldiers kill a zombie who is all alone, holding a bat, and who hands them a notebook.

Didn't read/don't remember that far back I guess...

That's what happens when you get into a story....

...that only gets updated once a week

I just got through reading Eden, and it only took me 3 days. I really enjoy reading, and have a horrible memory, so I have to read fast and get to the end of the story before I forget what happened

shadrach

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Posted: 6/15/2008 9:51:24 AM EDT

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Continued

DallasLooterShooter

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Posted: 6/15/2008 9:44:24 PM EDT

[#50]

Wow, this is like a zombie version of Blade! All the strengths and none of the weaknesses: so far, that is...

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