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12/6/2006 11:09:56 PM EDT
[#1]
Great stuff once again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12/7/2006 4:56:13 PM EDT
[#2]
Half,

Excellent!!

You asked for editorial review in the past and I would not change a thing.

Thanks again!
12/7/2006 6:58:37 PM EDT
[#3]
I could only find one thing wrong,    too longa wait from the last chapter

Great read though just keep us hangin and hangin and.......  
12/7/2006 7:01:20 PM EDT
[#4]
So far, great read.
12/9/2006 8:25:22 AM EDT
[#5]

Originally Posted By gunnutt1:
Great stuff once again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


+1
12/10/2006 2:59:34 PM EDT
[#6]
Great story Halffast. Keep up the good work. Now I'm waiting around again!
"the right of the people to keep and bear arms, shall not be infringed"

"...the one penis rule is the supreme rule and it supercedes all other penis rules." - Daytona955i

كافر
12/13/2006 12:36:35 AM EDT
[#7]
please keep it up!!
have gun will travel

Well you seen much combat? ......... I've seen a little on TV.

We are jolly green giants, walking the Earth with guns.
12/14/2006 2:49:13 AM EDT
[#8]
please sir, may I have some more
12/29/2006 11:12:09 PM EDT
[#9]
Bump (not that I think Halffast forgot or anything).
12/29/2006 11:16:04 PM EDT
[#10]
He's out on a little expedition right now I believe.
Protego quod vallo.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
12/30/2006 12:13:30 AM EDT
[#11]
height=8
Originally Posted By Hawkeye:
height=8
Originally Posted By Swindle1984:
They likely saw his brake lights when he made the turn and just couldn't slow down fast enough to make the turn themselves, then had to get the truck turned around, etc. His best bet would have either been to keep going and cross the bridge anyway, or get off the quad and start shooting as soon as they came after him.


His rear lights are covered with duct tape....
From Chapter 1.
height=8
He came back down and with the aid of the flashlight he found a roll of duct tape. He pulled off two pieces that he placed over the taillights on the four-wheeler. A little slip up like having a red light showing could ruin his day, he thought.

Besides the fact that tape sometimes comes off...

When he was on the railroad tracks, he connected the trailer lights.  It isn't clear if he remembered to disconnect them later.
1/1/2007 3:00:16 PM EDT
[#12]
THANK YOU HALFFAST!!  Thank you for writing Lights Out!  I have read it several times and will read it many more.  Is it available for purchase?  If so I would be interested in buying several copies.  

Lost and Found is shaping up to be another "survival classic."  The only downside is waiting for a new chapter.  
1/12/2007 9:22:22 PM EDT
[#13]
BUMP!   I need a fix!  where's halffast, its winter the weather should be bad, he should have lots of time to write
1/12/2007 9:36:44 PM EDT
[#14]
Is he riding a BIKE, as in 2 wheel DIRT BIKE,

Or a QUAD, as in four wheel ATV?
1/13/2007 12:44:01 AM EDT
[#15]
I like it!
1/14/2007 5:57:54 PM EDT
[#16]
O.K. Texas is an icehole right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SO ya have any time to write???
1/14/2007 7:00:43 PM EDT
[#17]

Originally Posted By gunnutt1:
O.K. Texas is an icehole right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SO ya have any time to write???


Agreed, I need my monthly fix.  Is he gonna shoot it out or dodge them and double back to the road?????
LIFE'S JOURNEY IS NOT TO ARRIVE AT THE GRAVE SAFELY IN A WELL PRESERVED BODY,
BUT RATHER TO SKID IN SIDEWAYS, TOTALLY WORN OUT SHOUTING "HOLY $H!T...WHAT A RIDE"!!
1/15/2007 1:08:29 AM EDT
[#18]
I vote to shoot 'em.  It will stop them from robbing anyone one else.  Good ridance to bad rubbish!

Great story.  Good to know I can go read Lights Out while I wait for the next installment.
1/17/2007 2:44:24 AM EDT
[#19]
Is the project stalled?
It's always dangerous to assume that "ceremonial" guards are purely ceremonial. - DK-Prof
1/17/2007 1:59:47 PM EDT
[#20]
More!

C'mon, I need my fix!!
"the right of the people to keep and bear arms, shall not be infringed"

"...the one penis rule is the supreme rule and it supercedes all other penis rules." - Daytona955i

كافر
1/17/2007 11:43:31 PM EDT
[#21]
I need another chapter of Lost & Found despirately!
1/18/2007 2:33:14 PM EDT
[#22]

Originally Posted By heysoos:
More!

C'mon, I need my fix!!




+100000
There is a guy... a NAKED GUY WITH ... with... with... WITH A SPIDER ON HIS DICK!!! There are PANTIES WITH SPIDERS CRAWLING OUT OF... THERE IS A SPIDER ON A ROLL OF TOILET PAPER!!! - DrFrige

...all your pie are belong to us. - PlaymoreMinds
1/21/2007 6:43:08 PM EDT
[#23]
Great job as usual.
1/24/2007 10:59:30 AM EDT
[#24]
Sorry that it's taking me so long to post the next chapter.  With the holidays and me being on vacation for two weeks (I took a vacation from writing as well) and now trying to get caught up at home and at work, I haven't been able to spend as much time writing as I would like.  I haven't even been able to write up an AAR on our hiking trip, yet.

However, I am still working on it.  Thanks for all of the encouragement.  You have no idea how much it means to me.  

I am also going to start in earnest on the rewrite of "Lights Out".  I am thinking of posting the first twenty chapters or so of it here as well.  However, spending time on it is going to slow how fast the chapters of "L&F" are ready.

Thanks again for all the support.

David

PS - If you thought that this was a new chapter...PSYCH!
If the boogey man lived under your bed, I'd charge him rent.

SWT

Molon Labe!
1/24/2007 11:13:00 AM EDT
[#25]

Originally Posted By Halffast:
..

PS - If you thought that this was a new chapter...PSYCH!


Doh!  I've been pwned by Halffast!
Visit www.MD-AR15.com

"All Arfcommers should wear thier multicam smoking jackets or jammies around the house in anticipation of JBT tasering/dog shooting/civil rights violation or the occasional impromptu gangbanger street theater." - m24sh
1/24/2007 11:21:45 AM EDT
[Last Edit: Hawkeye][Edited] [#26]
Nailed as well.
Protego quod vallo.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
1/24/2007 8:54:38 PM EDT
[#27]

Originally Posted By Halffast:


PS - If you thought that this was a new chapter...PSYCH!  



I tell you brother..... when it takes this long to get a chapter ..... it's nice to know the author  and have inside info
I only use my guns when kindness fails

SWT

I hope the zombies carry taurus

we took a bulldogger's money from him playin stook
but he's an oklahoma thug and he didn't want it took
pistol came out so we played some more
1/26/2007 12:59:20 AM EDT
[#28]
Oh soo tagged...
"Here's to the most important armed force of all... YOU and ME!" -Ted Nugent

"Life is tough, but it's tougher when you're stupid." -John Wayne

Sea Scout ship "City of Roses" www.sss601.org
1/26/2007 3:57:39 PM EDT
[Last Edit: Halffast][Edited] [#29]
Deleted - Please see update in OP
If the boogey man lived under your bed, I'd charge him rent.

SWT

Molon Labe!
1/26/2007 4:02:03 PM EDT
[Last Edit: Gidon][Edited] [#30]
Well let me be the first to say....Thanks for Chapter 9 My withdrawl pains just subsided from chapter 8 oh well.
1/26/2007 4:38:02 PM EDT
[#31]
Protego quod vallo.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
1/26/2007 6:05:10 PM EDT
[#32]
Thanks!
Originally Posted By rogue007: I would rather eat a cleveland steamer than own a glock.

Originally Posted By blackeye: Not all Muslims are terrorists but it seems all the terrorists are Muslim.

كافر
1/26/2007 6:27:50 PM EDT
[#33]
Another well written chapter. Thank you.
1/26/2007 6:41:47 PM EDT
[#34]
Sweeeeet.
You write great stuff.
1/26/2007 7:22:29 PM EDT
[#35]
woo hoo!!  thanks for the fix...  
If the bad guy hears the "racking sound" it's because I just shot his buddy and he's next. ~ Currahee

I dont know about you but when its 45f out i dont wanna be kneeling down sloshing in guts and mud. ~ Protus
1/26/2007 8:10:04 PM EDT
[#36]
sweeeeet!
<center id=center>guy who likes to gripe</center id=center>
<center id=center>كافر </center id=center>

1/26/2007 8:59:29 PM EDT
[#37]
I love this story...more please!
1/26/2007 9:30:12 PM EDT
[#38]
THNK you!!!!!!!!!!!!
1/26/2007 9:54:09 PM EDT
[#39]
I'm greatful for the latest chapter.  Your talent is greatly appreciated.
1/26/2007 11:55:34 PM EDT
[#40]
WHEW!!! I needed that!  The tremors have stopped, but I don't know for how long..... can't wait until next chapter.  
1/27/2007 12:50:57 AM EDT
[#41]
Definatly worth the wait...now the waiting begins all over but I'm sure it will also be worth it.
1/27/2007 12:58:32 AM EDT
[#42]
Someday I will learn not to start reading until the story is complete.

Thanks for the new chapter.

lumper.
1/27/2007 1:59:28 AM EDT
[#43]
Great chapter, thank you very much.  Keep up the great work!  If and when you ever publish you book, I will be in line to buy a copy.
1/27/2007 2:06:58 AM EDT
[#44]
Thank you for the much needed fix.
1/27/2007 5:43:41 PM EDT
[#45]
1/28/2007 1:45:04 PM EDT
[Last Edit: heysoos][Edited] [#46]
Ahhh... that's better... Thank You sir!
"the right of the people to keep and bear arms, shall not be infringed"

"...the one penis rule is the supreme rule and it supercedes all other penis rules." - Daytona955i

كافر
1/28/2007 3:36:14 PM EDT
[#47]
You need to be published.  Lights out was one of the best novels I've read in a long time.  This one looks like it's going to be right up there with it.

Mark
1/30/2007 7:05:18 PM EDT
[#48]
Shameless bump, love this!!
1/30/2007 9:47:32 PM EDT
[#49]
Excellent Chapter!!!
1/30/2007 10:46:09 PM EDT
[#50]
i can't wait for more.  great read Halfast!!!

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