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Posted: 8/20/2001 12:59:46 PM EDT
I think this is a good place to start just so I can get out there. And sence Garand stated he was having problems I figure this won't hurt. [url]www.blackanvilstudios.com[/url]
Link Posted: 8/20/2001 2:48:01 PM EDT
Do you think that you have a product that would sell? Are you looking for to increase your [i]revenew[/i]? If so a web page is the perfect means for it. You can not only sell locally but also around the globe. [i]Other[/i] the past few years it has been becoming easier and cheaper to get your own webpage. Well now is your time. Here at Black Anvil Studios we offer a wide [i]variaty[/i] of plans for you to choose [i]from[/i]
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not a flame, just some grammatical help. revenew should be spelled revenue. Other should be "Over" variatey should be spelled variety. garentee in your button links should be spelled guarantee. and this is really nitpicky, but the last sentence shouldn't end with "from". try ending it like "...of plans from which to choose." perhaps you might want to do some proof-reading. not a flame, just trying to help out. i really like the looks of the site though. it doesn't have that busy look that makes it impossible to find stuff. i hate that.
Link Posted: 8/20/2001 3:23:19 PM EDT
bussiness = business perfesional = professional You need to correct this stuff or potential customers will consider you to be very unprofessional...
Link Posted: 8/20/2001 3:44:45 PM EDT
Give the guy a little slack - spele chekur it werkd fur me!
Link Posted: 8/20/2001 3:53:32 PM EDT
hmmm glad I havnt submitted to the search engines. Need to go and work on that. [sniper]
Link Posted: 8/20/2001 4:15:28 PM EDT
somethingawful.com "Have Roger design your webpage"
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