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6/12/2017 7:22:47 AM EDT
[#1]
Thanks, Lee
Just downloaded, looks good so far!
6/12/2017 8:11:29 AM EDT
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I downloaded it. Thanks for the freebie OP. I'll fit it in with a couple of Warhammer 40K books I've been ignoring for a bit.

Are you wanting to know all of the typos and grammatical errors found?
6/12/2017 9:17:45 AM EDT
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Congrats op. And thanks for sharing it.  Downloaded it to my Kindle, will make sure to post a review.

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Thanks! I hope you enjoy it
6/12/2017 9:26:05 AM EDT
[#4]
Great read.

How does that stuff get into your mind?

Wow..
6/12/2017 9:32:03 AM EDT
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Just finished and left a review! Couldn't quit reading. 5 hours til I gotta be up for work.
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Thanks for the review! (sorry if you're draggin ass today...don't cuss me too much )
6/12/2017 9:57:13 AM EDT
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Congrats on your first book release! Just got it on Kindle.

Congrats on another accomplishment BTW. I love my Kindle ever since I finally got one 2 Xmas'es ago, but resisted putting the Kindle app on my phone. Being out of town and seeing your book release thread finally made me DL the Kindle app on my phone.

Sheesh, I coulda saved the Kindle money. The app on the phone is GREAT, and even easier to hold than the Kindle.

Will be sure to leave a review on Amazon when I've finished the book.
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Good to know about the Kindle app. I've been resistant to download it to my phone as well but you've changed my mind.
I have an older Kindle Fire and it's heavy for what it is...can't tell you how many times I've fallen asleep while reading and had it bash me in the face
My phone is much lighter so maybe my husband won't get so many squinky-eyed looks from people
(Maybe I should also stop yelling "don't hit me no mo" in public after a round with my Kindle)

And thanks so much for leaving a review, I hope you enjoy the book
6/12/2017 10:08:49 AM EDT
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Great read.

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lol A friend read one of my short stories and said, "Well that was disturbing. If I didn't know you better I'd be really worried."

I pointed to my head and said, "You? Think of how it is for me....I live here!"

Thanks for reading I hope you leave a review
6/12/2017 5:18:17 PM EDT
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THANKS FOR THE FREE BOOK OP!

It is pretty awesome timing to! I have a 6 hour flight tomorrow with a several hour lay over in Chicago. So I am going to need to have to brush up on my survival skills!

I will buy the book and every other one when they come out just to help support a fellow arfcommer.

Any similarities to the endworld series by David Robbins? Picked up  twins cities run by chance at the dollar tree when taking my grandmother there one day as it was only a dollar and it was the only interesting looking book. Ended up really liking it.
6/12/2017 6:01:32 PM EDT
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As of right now, there have been 1003 downloads of The Gordian Event since the promotion started.  This is more exposure than I had dreamed of!


To everyone who downloaded and posted such positive comments--THANK YOU!!!  I am truly blessed by your generosity and well-wishes.  I have to admit that I was nervous about posting here.  I like to think that I've got thick skin but I've learned over the years that Arfcom can be....well, a little brutal at times.....and nobody wants to hear how much their first book sucks, or that the zombie genre is too used up, etc.  We authors all say that we want honest opinions---but we're still people and nobody wants to be dog piled.  Writing is one of a few jobs where you have to put yourself and your work out there with the expectation of criticism.  (Sometimes, that really sucks the root!)

To everyone who posted negative comments--THANK YOU TOO!!!  The negative comments have been 100% well-founded criticism and I will be taking those comments to heart.  Your input will make me a bettter writer and I hope that you'll give me a chance to prove it by reading Book 2.

To everyone who downloaded and left a review--THANK YOU THE MOST!!!  Verified purchases with positive reviews are the key to Kindle sales.  Without your kind words, my novel would be like every other book out there......months without a nibble.  There have been roughly 70 posters who said that they would download in this thread, but just since I started typing, there have been another 10 downloads--it's now at 1013!!!  This is the kind of traffic that puts a book on the map, and I owe it to you!




TL;DR--Thank you Arfcom!!!  
6/12/2017 6:04:04 PM EDT
[#10]
Love the book so far. Great characters.

Ed
6/12/2017 6:14:19 PM EDT
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Don't forget that Ox has The Duke's drawl when you read it!  



Thank you
6/12/2017 6:35:20 PM EDT
[#12]
finally ordered it. now to figure out how to access without kindle.
6/12/2017 10:38:38 PM EDT
[#13]
Download the kindle app on your phone, it worked pretty well for me.

Lee: Loved the book, and I can't wait for the second installment. I left a review under the same name as here. It was like I could actually feel you growing as a writer as the book progressed, which was amazing for just 300 pages. Mr. Corrreia, whose books I also love, seemed to take a couple novels to improve the same amount
6/12/2017 11:40:35 PM EDT
[#14]
Downloaded the other day and just finished it up. Great job on the book!

Left you a 5 star review that should appear soon, with a hint to an ARF reference
6/13/2017 12:10:20 AM EDT
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I'm doing the talk and the walk

Ed

eta; though I'm chafing something fearsome
6/13/2017 8:57:46 PM EDT
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<shakes head>  That boy just ain't right
6/13/2017 8:59:48 PM EDT
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Downloaded the other day and just finished it up. Great job on the book!

Left you a 5 star review that should appear soon, with a hint to an ARF reference
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Thanks for the review, Eagle_19er
6/14/2017 1:06:45 AM EDT
[#18]
Hi Lee,

Many thanks for the great read.
Just finished it and left a review with a couple of Arf-related references...needs MOAR 10mm

I am looking forward to the next book in the series and would love to see these as Audible downloads in the future.
Most of my "reading" these days is accomplished via audiobooks, in my shop while I am casting/reloading ammo/building ARs or working on 1911s.
Your stories would be a great addition while I am doing these other activities.

I wish you great success and applaud your efforts, Bravo Zulu ma'am.


Keep The High Ground,


G
6/14/2017 1:54:09 AM EDT
[#19]


Its in my possession.
6/14/2017 1:57:34 AM EDT
[#20]
Will read after I finish Monster Hunter. Congrats OP.
6/14/2017 4:36:47 PM EDT
[#21]
Just downloadified from the unfuckified Amazon link.

Looking forward to reading it!
6/14/2017 4:47:15 PM EDT
[#22]
Downloaded.  Thanks!
6/14/2017 5:10:52 PM EDT
[#23]
Thanks!
6/14/2017 5:32:40 PM EDT
[#24]
Just finished it today.  Not quite what I am used to reading but I enjoyed it.  Generally the books I read have lots of explosions and things getting shot, a lot.

One thing I noticed was that the epilogue felt rushed.  Now, I have never written a book so maybe that is the way it is supposed to be.  Just adding in my .02.
6/14/2017 6:10:12 PM EDT
[#25]
Doned  - gotted it - now to read it ..

Thanks
6/14/2017 7:27:14 PM EDT
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Thanks again to everyone!  I am overwhelmed by the support.    You guys are the best!  

I'm looking into setting up an audio book now.....hoping Betty White is available to narrate!


Before I forget:  If you want to keep tabs on when the next book is coming out, or read some free short stories, visit my website or follow me on Facebook and Twitter.  If you haven't downloaded, The Gordian Event yet, the free promotion ends at midnight tonight!
6/14/2017 7:44:18 PM EDT
[#27]
Just finished it and it SUCKS.....

It sucks that I don't have book 2 in my possession.

Seriously, I really enjoyed it and looking forward to the next event.

Really kept my attention with the edge of the seat action.

You have a seriously overactive imagination!

Off to leave a review.  
6/14/2017 7:59:48 PM EDT
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Just finished it and it SUCKS.....

It sucks that I don't have book 2 in my possession.

Seriously, I really enjoyed it and looking forward to the next event.

Really kept my attention with the edge of the seat action.

You have a seriously overactive imagination!

Off to leave a review.  
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Yeah I'm almost finished with it and pissed that I have to wait for Book 2.

I wanted Both. This is ARF!

Ed
6/14/2017 8:05:07 PM EDT
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I was afraid of spoilers so I totally avoided this thread till I finished it.
6/14/2017 8:11:23 PM EDT
[#30]
Thanks for the book op. Finished it this afternoon, Damn good read, ready for the next one. Left you five stars on Amazon and good reads.
6/14/2017 9:20:11 PM EDT
[#31]
Download complete, and Thanks for the book. Will start reading it tonight.
6/14/2017 9:30:23 PM EDT
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Aww thanks Is it just me or does that cover feel great? It doesn't even feel like paper...they did a great job.


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Just finished it and it SUCKS.....

It sucks that I don't have book 2 in my possession.

Seriously, I really enjoyed it and looking forward to the next event.

Really kept my attention with the edge of the seat action.

You have a seriously overactive imagination!

Off to leave a review.  
I read the first line and said, uh-oh


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Yeah I'm almost finished with it and pissed that I have to wait for Book 2.

I wanted Both. This is ARF!

Ed
I had planned to take a month off before jummping on The Hellbender Event and finishing it up. I think I changed my mind and am going to start tomorrow Yay insomnia!


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Hi Lee,

Many thanks for the great read.
Just finished it and left a review with a couple of Arf-related references...needs MOAR 10mm

I am looking forward to the next book in the series and would love to see these as Audible downloads in the future.
Most of my "reading" these days is accomplished via audiobooks, in my shop while I am casting/reloading ammo/building ARs or working on 1911s.
Your stories would be a great addition while I am doing these other activities.

I wish you great success and applaud your efforts, Bravo Zulu ma'am.


Keep The High Ground,


G
In the next book the aliens have devised a sheild that is impenetrable to all calibers, except 10mm!!!

Kidding, but for you I'll add some 10mm in Hellbender...Delta Elite work for you?



Thanks so much for the reviews guys
6/15/2017 3:25:53 AM EDT
[#33]
Finished reading, great read.
Great concept as well.

Will post review tomorrow.   Never mind, just posted it.

One editing issue. When jess is at masons, she says she is gonna show him.....  the the sentence reads he, where it should be a she.

Seriously looking forward to next book.


Txl
6/15/2017 3:51:15 AM EDT
[#34]
Downloaded.
6/15/2017 4:58:59 PM EDT
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Aww thanks Is it just me or does that cover feel great? It doesn't even feel like paper...they did a great job.


I read the first line and said, uh-oh


I had planned to take a month off before jummping on The Hellbender Event and finishing it up. I think I changed my mind and am going to start tomorrow Yay insomnia!


In the next book the aliens have devised a sheild that is impenetrable to all calibers, except 10mm!!!

Kidding, but for you I'll add some 10mm in Hellbender...Delta Elite work for you?



Thanks so much for the reviews guys
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Aww thanks Is it just me or does that cover feel great? It doesn't even feel like paper...they did a great job.


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Just finished it and it SUCKS.....

It sucks that I don't have book 2 in my possession.

Seriously, I really enjoyed it and looking forward to the next event.

Really kept my attention with the edge of the seat action.

You have a seriously overactive imagination!

Off to leave a review.  
I read the first line and said, uh-oh


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Yeah I'm almost finished with it and pissed that I have to wait for Book 2.

I wanted Both. This is ARF!

Ed
I had planned to take a month off before jummping on The Hellbender Event and finishing it up. I think I changed my mind and am going to start tomorrow Yay insomnia!


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Hi Lee,

Many thanks for the great read.
Just finished it and left a review with a couple of Arf-related references...needs MOAR 10mm

I am looking forward to the next book in the series and would love to see these as Audible downloads in the future.
Most of my "reading" these days is accomplished via audiobooks, in my shop while I am casting/reloading ammo/building ARs or working on 1911s.
Your stories would be a great addition while I am doing these other activities.

I wish you great success and applaud your efforts, Bravo Zulu ma'am.


Keep The High Ground,


G
In the next book the aliens have devised a sheild that is impenetrable to all calibers, except 10mm!!!

Kidding, but for you I'll add some 10mm in Hellbender...Delta Elite work for you?



Thanks so much for the reviews guys
WHAT ABOUT BOOK 3!!!

Get on it......















Ed
6/25/2017 3:24:48 PM EDT
[#36]
Just finished and left a review.

Thank you for an entertaining couple of hours.

I am looking forward to Hellbender.

Are the worms going to turn into giant salamanders?
6/25/2017 3:37:39 PM EDT
[#37]
Congrats on the achievement,  purchased and it is now in my list of books on my high priority list.
6/25/2017 3:51:34 PM EDT
[#38]
Loved the book. Left a glowing review and 5 stars that it deserved.

Ed
6/25/2017 9:19:28 PM EDT
[#39]
Just a bump to remind everyone that our ARF writers that put their work out there for us to enjoy for free really do need us to leave a review for them.

If you are entertained then please leave them a review.
6/26/2017 10:59:56 PM EDT
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I'm only a quarter of the way through and WOW!  Well done!  I love it.  I appreciate the free download, however I will be ordering some paperbacks.  Write more books!!!
6/29/2017 2:22:21 PM EDT
[#41]
O My God!

Oh My God!

Oh My God!


It's hear. It came in the male and eye cut it open as soon ass I got in the door.

The greatest gift any person has ever beastowed on me. I'm am truly blessed.


Also I don't die from an Alien STD due to butt rape aboard a Star Cruiser. Life is good.

Thank you very much for the book. I'll treasure it always.  

OxEd
6/29/2017 6:47:29 PM EDT
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Left a review
7/5/2017 10:58:58 AM EDT
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7/5/2017 5:33:35 PM EDT
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Most people don't make the connection, or they just don't tell me that they did.



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Just a bump to remind everyone that our ARF writers that put their work out there for us to enjoy for free really do need us to leave a review for them.

If you are entertained then please leave them a review.
Thank you Hoji.  I really appreciate the bump and the review reminder
7/5/2017 5:34:48 PM EDT
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!  I really hope you enjoy!  (let me guess....one book per bathroom?)
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Thank you Rik.  I was inspired by writers like yourself, and I'm honored that you read my work.
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Oh My God!

Oh My God!


It's hear. It came in the male and eye cut it open as soon ass I got in the door.

The greatest gift any person has ever beastowed on me. I'm am truly blessed.
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Also I don't die from an Alien STD due to butt rape aboard a Star Cruiser. Life is good.

Thank you very much for the book. I'll treasure it always.  

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OxEd, my man,

I'm not ashamed to say that I got a little misty eyed when I read your post.  Hope you enjoy.


(aye'm knot hyring yoo four editingk or spel chickink)
7/5/2017 5:42:06 PM EDT
[#48]
Ill get them as soon as they show up on audible.
7/5/2017 5:44:04 PM EDT
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Working on it.  Betty White is booked solid
7/5/2017 10:48:51 PM EDT
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Thank you Rik.  I was inspired by writers like yourself, and I'm honored that you read my work.
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Thank you Rik.  I was inspired by writers like yourself, and I'm honored that you read my work.
Thanks, it was a very well written book!  Keep it up.

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