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Posted: 3/1/2020 5:07:10 PM EDT
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How we got here: Years ago I started writing a story here. It was going well, but between some rough patches, a fallen through publishing deal, and the thread going to the archives, I just let go of it. The story officially starts at this link, but please finish this first post before starting that. The first installment. https://www.ar15.com/forums/Outdoors/-ARCHIVED-THREAD-Humanity-s-Will-47-on-04-08-14-/20-661026/?page=1 What's changed: My writing style, my directions, and even my ability to remember detail may misalign at times. It has been many years but I still know where I want it to end, and the key events to happen in the story. I also need to retain my creativity. I know how bad it sucks having to wait, but sometimes the obligation wore me down. I'd like to get out a chapter per week, but I can't promise that. There will be no schedule, but I put a lot of thought into starting this again, and I hope those that gave up on seeing it through before will reconsider. If you read it before and remember, please still take the time to read it over again. I did so myself and feel embarrassed that I let it go. Well, no more of that. All new chapters will be posted here and I hope you enjoy them as much as I do. |
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time to re-read.
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R.I.P. Curtis Eccleston, Feb 6 2011
Proud Member Of Team Ranstad |
I remember this story. Glad you're picking it back up!
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Nice, It's back
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I remember this one. Glad to see you back at it!
Now give us moooaaarrrr!! |
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Fantastic! Thank you.
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Thanks for posting it again. Look forward to reading more.
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We can have moar? Yes?
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MOAR?
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!! It is Required that You Give Us MOAR! |
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Excellennnnnt! Will be MOAR be continuing continuously?
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Originally Posted By GreenGiant: Excellennnnnt! Will be MOAR be continuing continuously? View Quote My direction for the next two chapters is ultra clear in my mind, so it shouldn't be near as long of a wait. A lot of times what stops me up isn't what I'm writing now, its how it will play into what comes after that. |
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I read the old story again tonight. Keep it going, I like it.
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I survived the cockpocalypse of 11/21/2012.
Bacon grease, the Muslim approved .mil lubricant. |
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Sorry for the delay. Should have the new chapter up in the next week.
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# Chapter 52 - Insides
We sped up as we approached the farm house. We had to make it believable. You couldn't see anyone coming from the front or far side of the farm house, but you could hear a car coming down the gravel road a mile away. Me: "Alright boys. Let's be smart and efficient here." Gizmo: "My nose still hurts. I'm still going to shoot you in the dick." Me: "Good luck with that shithead." We slid on the dirt driveway as Gizmo slammed on the brakes and let off the horn suddenly. Marcus: "What the fuck?!" Gizmo: "Shit." Neither of them were getting out of the car as planned. I sat up from my fictitious slumped over position to see what was going on. Out past the barn sat a large black helicopter. Gizmo: "Get your fucking guns now." Just as we hit panic mode Bonnie stumbled through the storm door. Her hands were bound and she was crying. She walked up to the edge of the porch and we all froze as she just stared at us for what seemed like an eternity. THUNK! I watched the front of her face explode before her corpse fell down the stairs. From there time seemed to move in slow motion. The front door of the farm house opened up and a terribly familiar face draped in red hair came walking out holding the huge revolver she just shot Bonnie with. I got out of the vehicle immediately. Me: "Sarah, what the fuck are you doing here?!" Sarah: "Well that's no way to speak to a lady, stranger." I saw movement on the other side of the car but it was too fast for me to even respond. Before I knew it Gizmo was flying through the air before rolling off the hood onto the ground almost in front of me on his side. As we got Gizmo to his feet an entire team of kitted up goons came out from the barn, meanwhile the guy who tossed him climbed up the side of the porch to sit on the railing next to where Sarah stood. The team of about 10 lined up on us and we reluctantly dropped our guns. Sarah whispered something to the guy who had climbed up next to her. He looked like a shaved ape with slicked back hair. He stared straight at me with blood red eyes and showed the most evil grin I've ever seen. I had become relatively fearless, but I felt like I was looking straight at the devil. This was a guy who was doing bad things long before the shit hit the fan. Sarah focused her attention back to me. Sarah: "Baby I've missed you, hahaha." Her laugh was almost satanic. I immediately thought of Tiff. Me: "Where the fuck are the others?" Sarah: "They're all dead. Consider it karma after you tried to burn us all alive." Gizmo turned to look at me with a look of absolute devastation. I could only hope he would keep his cool. Gizmo: "Reagan...." I started blacking out as I slowly walked past Gizmo and Marcus towards the porch. One of the goons told me to stop and I ignored him outright. There was only one thing on my mind. Me: "I'm going to fucking kill you." Sarah: "No, no you're not. I guess you grew attached to the orphan huh? When we heard rumors of a cure to the virus down in this area I never expected you would be dumb enough to be involved. Imagine my surprise to find this slut here." Sarah waved her hand and Tiff was pushed through the door hard enough to fall down the stairs at my feet. The seemingly generic goon stood at Sarah's side. Tiff's hands were bound and as I dropped down to check on her she winked at me. It was then I connected the dots. Tiff could have landed on her feet easily. They didn't know she's infected. Either way I was just happy she was alive. I turned back to Sarah. Me: "So what's the plan here you fucking bitch?" Sarah: "Well your manners have certainly devolved. I'd like to introduce you to Zach." I was just opening my mouth to talk shit when Zach lept off the porch right at me. I hit the ground and lost sight of him. In the split second it took me to get to my knees to start standing up I ate a kick so hard in the chin it actually brought me the rest of the way up to my feet. Unfortunately it was also hard enough I was rocked as I fell back into the front of the Tahoe. Before I even had a second to recover I got hit with enough force I was certain I heard my skull crack. I dropped to the ground again and saw Tiff start to stand up. I shook my head no at her. Zach: "This fucking guy is supposed to be tough? I'm going to fucking eat all of his friends in front of him." Sarah: "Give him a second to warm up." He reached to his waist and drew an obnoxiously large knife. Zach: "Oh, I'll get him nice and warm." Me: "Did you bring this guy to do some gay shit Sarah, or is this all his own doing. " Zach: "I'm going to fuck your girlfriend after I eat your fucking heart!" He ran at me with the knife. At this point I realized Sarah was right. The hatred flowing through me, the necessity of protecting my friends, I was starting to feel the infection pulse through my veins. He swung the knife at me three or four times before I had a window to land a strike. I hit him in the throat so hard I thought I felt my fist make contact with his spine. He grabbed his neck with one hand and made a sloppy defensive swing at me with the knife in the other. As the swing missed I followed his arm to use the momentum of the knife back towards him. The knife sunk into his chest. It had to be the lung as he started gurgling and coughing. Me: "So about that killing me thing...." I decided I'd stab the knife into his skull, but as soon as I started pulling the knife out he removed one hand from my shoulder and started fighting to keep me from pulling the knife out. He laughed like a crazy man as he struggled to keep the knife buried in his lung. The blood in his mouth was demonic looking, and he grabbed me by the neck with his other hand. He squeezed hard enough I couldn't even breathe as he pulled my face closer to his. His laughing and spitting splattered blood on my face. Before all I could smell was Gizmo's blood, but now this asshole's blood and breath stunk so strong I could taste it. Zach: "Maybe I'll fuck her before I kill you." He started pushing me backwards on my feet, still squeezing my neck so hard my trachea had most likely collapsed. Finally he let go of the knife but he quickly grabbed me by my belt with his now free hand and lifted me into the air sideways above his head. I got two stabs off in the chest before letting go of the knife to prepare for impact as he threw me. I hit the porch stairs so hard on my back that they broke. Maybe it was my collapsed wind pipe or my newly broken ribs but I was suffocating. Tiff still sat on her knees looking at me like I was an idiot. Again I shook my head at her. If I failed, maybe she could survive this if they didn't know she's infected too. Zach took a second to cough up what looked like a gallon of blood before wiping his mouth. Slowly I started breathing again as I tried to recover as well. Zach: "You see Doug? I'm the upgrade. I am the future. Sarah, do you see now? We don't need his strain anymore." Sarah: "Fine. Kill the girl first." Zach: "With pleasure." Maybe it was because I knew even Tiff wouldn't stand a chance against him. Maybe it was the goons who were going to mow my friends down. Maybe it was the anger towards Sarah who was so nonchalant she might as well be painting her nails. I don't know, but a chill ran through my body and my ears popped. I could see clear. I could breathe again. I squeezed my fist so hard i couldn't tell if it was my joints cracking or actually my bones breaking. There was no more pain. Just the urge to do primal acts of violence. The Rolling Stones - Play With Fire (Lyric Video) |
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Hell yeah, more please.
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I survived the cockpocalypse of 11/21/2012.
Bacon grease, the Muslim approved .mil lubricant. |
Must! Have! Moar!
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I haven't forgotten about this. I've rewritten this chapter literally 5 times. It's practically impossible to put how much happens in a short amount of time into words. Still trying to figure it out.
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Any chance at all of MOAR?
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This is great OP. Looking forward to next installment.
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Sorry guys. My phone cooked itself back in February and I lost everything. I basically had a road map for the story and the chapters that were the dot connectors. That means a lot of it is going to be from scratch though.
Time is a limit, not to mention I already spend most of my day staring into a screen and writing for work. If I have time over the holiday I’ll try and get started again, but losing all of that was a huge kick to my motivation’s bean bag. I promise it is NOT a dead story though. |
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"Freedom is a messy business." - LaRue_Tactical
I am a sack of blood, held together by un-tanned leather. . . |
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I hope it's not done forever
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I’ll get back to it, but not sure when. I have a ton going on with work currently and my free time is pretty limited. At some point in the next couple months I have to take a vacation so that’s my goal to knock a bunch out.
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The root of politics is power and money
GA, USA
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Need moar!
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In the Marines I got PT Thrashed on Christmas by our Drill Instructor because he blamed the death of Christ on recruits.
-USAWTF |
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Hmmm, this is going to be good !!!
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Still waiting on primal acts of violence.
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Keep seeing this bumped, . Hopefully it gets finished.
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I survived the cockpocalypse of 11/21/2012.
Bacon grease, the Muslim approved .mil lubricant. |
Sorry guys. Got bumped up at work and kids are hitting the age where there’s always something. I’ll have some free time next month and will try to knock a chapter or two out but can’t promise anything.
I have to be in the right mindset and busy is not it. |
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Originally Posted By olds442tyguy: Sorry guys. Got bumped up at work and kids are hitting the age where there’s always something. I’ll have some free time next month and will try to knock a chapter or two out but can’t promise anything. I have to be in the right mindset and busy is not it. View Quote Woohoo |
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I survived the cockpocalypse of 11/21/2012.
Bacon grease, the Muslim approved .mil lubricant. |
The root of politics is power and money
GA, USA
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Awesome to hear.
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In the Marines I got PT Thrashed on Christmas by our Drill Instructor because he blamed the death of Christ on recruits.
-USAWTF |
/sits down and gets comfy/ OK, glad to see you are back. I'll just wait right 'cher while you gets ta 'riten!
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/stands and stretches---POP! CRACK!/ Been sittin' here for Quite a Spell. Any chance of MOAR!? I hope you are well and have some story saved up for us Internet Freeloaders.
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Originally Posted By GreenGiant: /sits down and gets comfy/ OK, glad to see you are back. I'll just wait right 'cher while you gets ta 'riten! View Quote Originally Posted By GreenGiant: /stands and stretches---POP! CRACK!/ Been sittin' here for Quite a Spell. Any chance of MOAR!? I hope you are well and have some story saved up for us Internet Freeloaders. View Quote Lmao |
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"Freedom is a messy business." - LaRue_Tactical
I am a sack of blood, held together by un-tanned leather. . . |
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Doug may never commit primal acts of violence.
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