You have spare socks. That puts you ahead of the usual first BOB poster.
Yes, it looks like your weight is going to be way heavy. Use a bathroom scale, hop on, then subtract your weight. Thats a great way to start your trimming process by keeping track.
A good trimming process will take a good while both trying out your gear so you know what you need, what you don't, and what you missed.
I'll tell you one thing is helps is separating tactical from regular field gear. Once you find your ideal gear weight, then you can adapt by adding or deleting to match that weight depending on scenario. (I'm so out of shape, tactical is nothing but ultralight stuff.)
Keep track of both weights same scale method.
Just a first pass, it looks like you are heavy on clothes for summer (good to adapt your gear by season) and water. There's two ways to approach water, carry more or have a collection method. MO, collection method should do fine and not add to your weight. A light weight filter should do the job even a squeeze bottle type works. Clothes either figure on wearing what you have in your pack or discarding so figure that additional weight optional/can be subtracted. An approach that works for me, actually learned in the field from another SF member, is socks, underwear, and then only poly pros. When your clothes are wet or need washed, you can wear poly pros, wear them at night, or under the clothes in really cold weather. Its a good approach and seeing it in action, I adopted it.
I didn't see how you intend to boil water other than a fire. What you decide there is dependent on your terrain. Ebsits/Triox works just fine for a limited life BoB which by your food looks like 3-4 comfortable days.
I like your candy.
That was a major favorite of the NCOs when I was serving. They're good to not only curb your appetite on the move but a good sugar buzz. I use to think of Snickers as we do now food bars.
Very nice first shot. Make sure to keep posting with us as how it develops in the future. It really helps others.
Tj