Updates since this is bumped anyway:
I've since given in and changed "critters" to "animals".
Also added "as her health deteriorated" to the bit about my grandfather, since it occurred to me that it sounded strange otherwise.
Also, unrelated to this thread but probably worth mentioning, there's a second uncle cropped out of that fridge pic, this one off to the right of the pic. That uncle, Dean, was an Annapolis graduate and a USMC artillery officer in Vietnam, and was given a military burial two weeks ago.
As to responses, 2 of the first 3 petered out as communications showed we didn't have much in common (one was looking for a travel agent, and the other closed me so I just wasn't what she was into), but 2 more women contacted me, so I'm still talking to 3. Either that's a new year's fluke of women making resolutions to contact more people, or I'm presenting myself better now. Or I'm grotesque and presenting myself inaccurately, but either way I'll take it.