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Posted: 10/16/2010 2:01:48 PM EDT
I got a lot of good feedback on the zombie story.  I enjoyed writing it, and thank everyone who took the time to read it.

I am currently working on a novel based on the last short story I wrote, and used the zombie story to take a break from it and hopefully bust through some writer's block.  Now I'd like to get some opinions on the story as I get cranking back on the novel.  Others have read it, but they know me; I'd like to hear from some folks who don't.

Set in the late 90's.
Written in the first person.
130 pages, double spaced.  Reads quickly.
Offers a different view on a significant assassination, one with a 50 year anniversary coming soon.

I'll send it to the first ten posters who indicate interest, with the caveat that you DO NOT FORWARD it electronically without permission.  The story was not my idea, and I got the originator to agree to some outside looks now that we're about halfway through.  Through the anonymity of the internet, I feel the critiques would be more honest.

Thanks,
Peengwin

ETA:  If you were one of the first few to post, and have not received the story, I need your email address.  I cannot attach it through the site email.
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 2:06:51 PM EDT
[#1]
shotgun!
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 2:58:45 PM EDT
[#2]
Interested
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 2:59:53 PM EDT
[#3]
interested
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 3:07:48 PM EDT
[#4]
I will begin sending it out tomorrow when I scrub my jump drives.
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 3:13:11 PM EDT
[#5]
Count me in.
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 3:20:10 PM EDT
[#6]
I am interested, please.
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 3:58:12 PM EDT
[#7]
I'm up for something to read
Link Posted: 10/16/2010 4:27:57 PM EDT
[#8]
I am interested
Link Posted: 10/17/2010 12:20:01 PM EDT
[#9]
Those who have responded so far, I need an IM with an email address.  I don't see an option to attach files to arfcom email.

I will send it as MS Word .doc, it will be from my gmail account.

Or, send a quick message with your arf screen name to [email protected]
Link Posted: 10/17/2010 3:24:09 PM EDT
[#10]
This is Bgcoop8784, on rooftops pc. send me a copy, I'd really enjoy the reading, [email protected]. Thanks, I'll let you know what i think
Link Posted: 10/17/2010 4:14:30 PM EDT
[#11]
It has been sent to:

Pitdog
Mutki
CDM024
BgCoop
jbi1104
AKAce
ctdracing

Any other takers, if I have your email by C.O.B. today I will send it out and wait for critiques.

It's a serious subject, but the story doesn't have to be taken seriously.  Fiction, FTW.

Edited for today.
Link Posted: 10/17/2010 5:32:49 PM EDT
[#12]
Quoted:
It has been sent to:

Pitdog
Mutki
CDM024
BgCoop
jbi1104

Any other takers, if I have your email by tomorrow I will send it out and wait for critiques.

It's a serious subject, but the story doesn't have to be taken seriously.  Fiction, FTW.


Thanks for the email, will try to get some reading done tomorrow, know that I loved the short story.

Link Posted: 10/17/2010 6:28:13 PM EDT
[#13]
Email sent.

Chris
Link Posted: 10/20/2010 8:19:40 PM EDT
[#14]
Anyone had a chance to run through it yet?
Link Posted: 10/24/2010 6:18:08 PM EDT
[#15]
Bump.
Link Posted: 10/29/2010 6:50:06 AM EDT
[#16]
One last bump.
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