Warning

 

Close

Confirm Action

Are you sure you wish to do this?

Confirm Cancel
Member Login

Site Notices
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:07:35 AM EST
ttt
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:08:59 AM EST
Very nice!
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:11:53 AM EST
I think some of her designs are too busy, but Im not knocking her work what so ever.


The more simple work looks really really good tho.


Like the skull graphic and Y&M Pool service, very nice
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:13:55 AM EST
[Last Edit: 11/4/2009 5:14:16 AM EST by goatkisser]
Originally Posted By IchWarrior:
I think some of her designs are too busy, but I'm not knocking her work what so ever.


The more simple work looks really really good tho.


Like the skull graphic and Y&M Pool service, very nice


This... Not bashing her work at all, just a little busy for these old eyes.... She is very creative and talented....
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:15:38 AM EST
3/10 stop using windows 95 paint
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:16:46 AM EST

Originally Posted By goatkisser:
Originally Posted By IchWarrior:
I think some of her designs are too busy, but I'm not knocking her work what so ever.


The more simple work looks really really good tho.


Like the skull graphic and Y&M Pool service, very nice


This... Not bashing her work at all, just a little busy for these old eyes.... She is very creative and talented....

Ditto



Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:17:34 AM EST
She is way too reliant on filters and effects. She needs to pay more attention to the basic principles of design and composition.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:17:49 AM EST
Didn't the last attempt at this get locked and deleted this am?
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:18:59 AM EST
nice
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:23:29 AM EST
[Last Edit: 11/4/2009 5:24:15 AM EST by Trumpet]
Originally Posted By USC45:
She is way too reliant on filters and effects. She needs to pay more attention to the basic principles of design and composition.


+1. The first one looks like a mediocre photoshop. The BBQ one looks, well....disgusting. However, it's kind of tricky to photograph food and make it look good. The last two look like the average T-shirt design I see kids wearing around here (PG MD)

Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:29:24 AM EST
[Last Edit: 11/4/2009 5:29:44 AM EST by Hoppy]
Careful, some might think this is close to spamming the group.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:31:10 AM EST

Originally Posted By Hoppy:
Careful, some might think this is close to spamming the group.


He did it once already in another attempt early this morning and it went from zero to shit storm in about 30 seconds and the thread mysteriously disappeared.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:33:09 AM EST
The simple vector graphic designs are really nice. But the Photoshopped designs do not have the correct color contrasts. The wording is hard to read and they are too busy
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:33:55 AM EST
Not trying to bash here - but she could really benefit from a typography class and a fundamentals of design and layout class.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:34:17 AM EST
Only the "PROBULLS" is any good. And something is not right with the text between the horns as it is. And I have to question if she made the "bull" or lifted it from somewhere else and just pasted the text in there.

The rest of them are a busy mishmash of amateurism that looks designed to appeal to a ghetto mindset.

Well, the last one, the skull/mowhawk/splattered paint thing might be okay as a rock concert poster, but it's still too busy.


I don't want to flame, just being honest here.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:35:09 AM EST
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:39:46 AM EST
Is it just me or does anyone elses eyes hurt like they were just staring at someone arc welding?
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:39:52 AM EST
Originally Posted By AJ_Dual:
Only the "PROBULLS" is any good. And something is not right with the text between the horns as it is. And I have to question if she made the "bull" or lifted it from somewhere else and just pasted the text in there.

The rest of them are a busy mishmash of amateurism that looks designed to appeal to a ghetto mindset.
Well, the last one, the skull/mowhawk/splattered paint thing might be okay as a rock concert poster, but it's still too busy.


I don't want to flame, just being honest here.


I was trying to avoid saying that, but hopefully the OP being in MD got it with my PG reference.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:42:47 AM EST
mmm...skillz? I dunno - id digest some of the above comments - cause their on the money. Way to reliant on filters and as far as layout and design - not working.

And I work outside a graphics dept. ( but I am a videographer)
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:46:13 AM EST
[Last Edit: 11/4/2009 5:48:04 AM EST by Mikegigabyte]
hope you arent advertising services here, will get you locked out. if it was me I wouldnt even post things like this, how about pics of the wife instead.

just noticed the post count, yeah I say advertising
Big time advertising, as the websites in the pic work
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:47:05 AM EST
nice!
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:47:46 AM EST
Being a web developer and working in a design firm for 3.5 yrs, I wouldn't say these are anything special.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:49:02 AM EST
IBTL
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:50:55 AM EST

Originally Posted By Mikegigabyte:
hope you arent advertising services here, will get you locked out. if it was me I wouldnt even post things like this, how about pics of the wife instead.

just noticed the post count, yeah I say advertising
Big time advertising, as the websites in the pic work


Notice the screen name and then the corresponding advertisement.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:51:23 AM EST
Originally Posted By metalsaber:
Being a web developer and working in a design firm for 3.5 yrs, I wouldn't say these are anything special.


I would, just not in a good way...
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:52:29 AM EST
Originally Posted By EightySecond:

Originally Posted By Mikegigabyte:
hope you arent advertising services here, will get you locked out. if it was me I wouldnt even post things like this, how about pics of the wife instead.

just noticed the post count, yeah I say advertising
Big time advertising, as the websites in the pic work


Notice the screen name and then the corresponding advertisement.


good eye
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:52:36 AM EST
Originally Posted By EightySecond:

Originally Posted By Mikegigabyte:
hope you arent advertising services here, will get you locked out. if it was me I wouldnt even post things like this, how about pics of the wife instead.

just noticed the post count, yeah I say advertising
Big time advertising, as the websites in the pic work


Notice the screen name and then the corresponding advertisement.


MmmHmmmm. I checked out that website. I wonder what exact "performance" they mean when it says "performance driven pits". The whole website smakes of bottles of "Cristal" and blunts.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:52:54 AM EST
meh...check out some porn sites for good sharp graphic work
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:53:15 AM EST

Originally Posted By Trumpet:
Originally Posted By EightySecond:

Originally Posted By Mikegigabyte:
hope you arent advertising services here, will get you locked out. if it was me I wouldnt even post things like this, how about pics of the wife instead.

just noticed the post count, yeah I say advertising
Big time advertising, as the websites in the pic work


Notice the screen name and then the corresponding advertisement.


MmmHmmmm. I checked out that website. I wonder what exact "performance" they mean when it says "performance driven pits". The whole website smakes of bottles of "Cristal" and blunts.

It makes me think of Michael Vick.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:54:11 AM EST
Can I get her to design some beer bottle labels for my brewery?

I can pay with product.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:54:48 AM EST
Originally Posted By IchWarrior:
I think some of her designs are too busy, but Im not knocking her work what so ever.


The more simple work looks really really good tho.


Like the skull graphic and Y&M Pool service, very nice



+1

I am not a graphic designer, but sometime simple is better, also symmetry is important.

A+ for effort, tell her to keep it up.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:55:13 AM EST
is this fucking spam posing as a post?

txl
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:57:04 AM EST
This will not turn out well.

BTW that BBQ pix looks a little odd,does anyone notice anything strange in that pix ?
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:57:35 AM EST
Do you by chance live in the Ghetto?

I only see ads for Pitbulls and Car detailing in the ghetto. Not that I have anything against Pitbulls I own one.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 5:59:06 AM EST
Some of those look like the postcard advertisements for hood rat concerts you find on the counter in ghetto gas stations.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 6:00:28 AM EST
Hoping this does not get locked to quick because I like reading some of the critique.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 6:04:21 AM EST
her composition is a little off. There is a little too much going on in some of them. I like the pool one with the plant.
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 6:04:47 AM EST
Originally Posted By EightySecond:
He did it once already in another attempt early this morning and it went from zero to shit storm in about 30 seconds and the thread mysteriously disappeared.

Well that's good news. I replied to that thread and when I tried to check on it a couple minutes later, it was gone. Search wouldn't find it either by topic or reply author. I thought I had either been hallucinating or REALLY pissed off the staff.


Jane

Link Posted: 11/4/2009 6:05:25 AM EST
Link Posted: 11/4/2009 6:05:41 AM EST
[Last Edit: 11/4/2009 6:05:41 AM EST by John_Wayne777]
You need authorization to advertise.
Top Top