A guarded float will prevent debris from lodging under the float keeping the pump on
when not needed. I've found quite a few beer caps, wine corks, lime rinds and things in general
wedged under un guarded floats.
Nothing wrong with the white plastic thru-hulls if you replace them every 10 years or so.
I don't like them under the waterline, but for bilge/livewell outlets they are fine.
Nothing wrong with the corregated bilge hose either. Clear vinyl hose won't hold up to
oils/chemicals and heat you find in a bilge and will become hard and very stiff within a few years.
ETA- A couple pro tips..
Mount the bilge pump and float on an aluminum strap 3 inches or so wide. Bend strap
so it conforms to the hull and up one of the stringers. Mount strap
to top of a stringer with a couple stainless screws. Silicone the screws so water doesn't
penetrate into the stringer. This makes servicing the pump/float easy by removing the screws and lifting/sliding the whole assembly
out for service.
The corregated bilge hose also conforms to USCG/ NMMA fire ratings. Clear vinyl hose does not.