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Posted: 5/21/2010 7:32:28 PM EDT
One year into the Second Civil War.  Progressive and Constitutional forces forces battle for the future of the United States.

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Link Posted: 5/21/2010 7:39:08 PM EDT
[#1]
MOOOAAAARRRR!

Thanks for the new stuff.
Link Posted: 5/21/2010 8:42:04 PM EDT
[#2]
Moar
Link Posted: 5/21/2010 10:03:58 PM EDT
[#3]
Bring it on!!!!
Link Posted: 5/22/2010 7:47:46 AM EDT
[#4]
nice
Link Posted: 5/22/2010 11:09:34 PM EDT
[#5]

 
 
























IOO
Link Posted: 5/23/2010 9:51:23 PM EDT
[#6]
Finally :-)
More please Sharkman
Link Posted: 5/25/2010 1:36:58 PM EDT
[#7]
WOO HOO!!!!! He's back!! Looking forward to more...

Thanks
Link Posted: 5/27/2010 7:37:41 PM EDT
[#8]
Updated up top.
Link Posted: 5/31/2010 1:53:24 AM EDT
[#9]



Quoted:


Updated up top.


perhaps ...

 



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some sort of separation between postings, to make it easier for eyes to lock on.  







Thank you again, good reading!  
Link Posted: 6/11/2010 8:26:13 PM EDT
[#10]
Quoted:

Quoted:
Updated up top.

perhaps ...  

––––––-

some sort of separation between postings, to make it easier for eyes to lock on.  


Thank you again, good reading!  


Look for the bold an underline.  Each update with start with the location of the scene.  Newest update is here:

Progressive Peace Maintenance Command
Seattle, Washington
Link Posted: 6/14/2010 7:11:42 PM EDT
[#11]
You've got me back on the hook Sharkman. Lets go go go ;-)
Link Posted: 6/14/2010 7:48:44 PM EDT
[#12]
New post on 6/14/10

Picks up at the Support by fire position.
Link Posted: 6/15/2010 7:52:21 AM EDT
[#13]
Holy crap.
It's a drug lab. Contain the rats with MG fire while dropping a mortar round in every building in the compound . . . for safety.
Why were they clearing buildings before that was done?

This is an uncharacteristic tactical error in my book.
Link Posted: 6/15/2010 7:39:51 PM EDT
[#14]
Updated 06/15/10
Link Posted: 6/16/2010 11:45:19 AM EDT
[#15]
nice

thanks
Link Posted: 6/18/2010 6:54:14 AM EDT
[#16]
Good stuff!  Thanks!

.........Mounger
Link Posted: 6/30/2010 6:40:54 PM EDT
[#17]
Updated again.  Heading in Blue.
Link Posted: 6/30/2010 8:19:48 PM EDT
[#18]
OK . . .  I get it :-)
Link Posted: 7/4/2010 11:57:22 AM EDT
[#19]
Thanks for the update!

Looking forward to the next!

.............Mounger
Link Posted: 7/6/2010 10:49:52 PM EDT
[#20]
Come on Sharky . . .
light the fuse on this firecracker :-)
Link Posted: 7/14/2010 7:20:54 PM EDT
[#21]
Quoted:
Come on Sharky . . .
light the fuse on this firecracker :-)


Working on it.  Updates above.
Link Posted: 7/16/2010 5:29:52 PM EDT
[#22]
good stuff
Link Posted: 7/17/2010 8:05:41 PM EDT
[#23]
YES !!!!!
That's what I'm talkin about
Link Posted: 7/17/2010 8:53:19 PM EDT
[#24]
Thank You!

..........Mounger
Link Posted: 7/18/2010 11:50:52 AM EDT
[#25]
Be very graphic and detailed on the coming beat down, please!
Link Posted: 7/18/2010 9:30:51 PM EDT
[#26]
Link Posted: 7/23/2010 3:10:07 PM EDT
[#27]
Quoted:
Be very graphic and detailed on the coming beat down, please!


Beat down above.

Link Posted: 7/23/2010 3:48:12 PM EDT
[#28]
Very nice!
Link Posted: 7/23/2010 3:51:53 PM EDT
[#29]
Outstanding. Alway enjoy it.
Link Posted: 7/23/2010 6:03:54 PM EDT
[#30]
Best 20 min. of my day, Thanks
Link Posted: 7/23/2010 7:29:13 PM EDT
[#31]
Definitely worth the wait.
Link Posted: 7/23/2010 9:34:51 PM EDT
[#32]
Updated and completed up top.
Link Posted: 7/24/2010 12:44:53 AM EDT
[#33]



Quoted:


Updated and completed up top.





 
Link Posted: 7/24/2010 7:53:48 AM EDT
[#34]
This was fantastic Sharkman. Just awesome.
I love how you showed how the hardships Sean suffered led to emotional degradation. A rich story of the human condition and not shallow, glorified "revolution porn".

What's next?
Link Posted: 7/24/2010 9:11:43 AM EDT
[#35]
Sharkman thanks again for sharing your talent!

Looking forward to the next one!

........Mounger
Link Posted: 7/24/2010 9:20:44 AM EDT
[#36]
the "whole society project"... hmmm ––- methinks there is another spinoff here

bravo sir - excellent work
Link Posted: 7/24/2010 4:13:07 PM EDT
[#37]
Great work, I hope there will be more soon!!!!!!!
Link Posted: 7/24/2010 7:58:01 PM EDT
[#38]
Quoted:
the "whole society project"... hmmm ––- methinks there is another spinoff here

bravo sir - excellent work


The Whole Society Project will get tackled in the next book (book type book, 300+ pages worth like Flip)  but I'm giving some hints on it in the other story I got running here which I can focus on now that this one is done.

The Whole Society folks will be an unpleasant bunch, but I'm sure Sean and Jim will find some middle-ground/common sense compromise everybody can live with.




Either that or they will just kill them.
Link Posted: 7/24/2010 8:25:09 PM EDT
[#39]
It's people...the Whole Society elixir is...PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Link Posted: 7/26/2010 2:33:23 PM EDT
[#40]
Quoted:
It's people...the Whole Society elixir is...PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


So who would be Charlton Heston?
Link Posted: 7/26/2010 3:30:48 PM EDT
[#41]
Link Posted: 7/27/2010 7:44:48 PM EDT
[#42]
I've updated the other story here, "Never Existed," with some Whole Society action.  Grab your soma tablets and your soylent green and enjoy the dystopian goodness.
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