I know there are a lot of fans of the Scot Harvath books out there, but I have to ask:
Do these books get better?
I'm about 2/3rds of the way through this first book and boy am I not enjoying it.
Mr. Thor spends page after page telling us Scot is a badass SEAL, a great Secret Serviceman, etc etc, but he has yet to SHOW me Scot is any of those things. So far he's been nothing but a petulant child complaining and stumbling his way through one stupid idea after another and mostly surviving through luck and the incompetence of his foes.
We get multiple mentions of his "security" measure, the hair on the door frame, and yet he still manages to walk into an ambush and is blindsided after noting that the hair was missing.
He just happens to know people in all the right places, even halfway across the globe, where he needs to go or whom have information he needs. Also, the author has a habit of telling us things Scot miraculously acquired at some vague point in the past IE - "He had picked up such-and-such at the gift shop when he got off the train." Once or twice is forgivable, but continually having your character produce things he found off-page, so to speak, is dishonest to your readers.
I don't even want to know how he's going to employ the airsoft Glock. I can't imagine he wouldn't have been better off buying a nice pocket knife to carry, but whatever.
I'll finish the book, because I rarely give up on one once I start, but it would take a dramatic turn of events for me to consider buying another.
I think maybe I'll move on and try the Bosch series by Connelly instead.